@hybridlore
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @hybridlore @linus-smallprint
So, in answer to all the questions:
the laptop did an un-authorized update. So while I hit save on all my documents, I still had them minimized instead of fully closed. Normally it tells me about the update and offers a time. I then shut everything fully down, make sure it’s…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @anyone-else
and Part 3 (and I might share more from what would be the next scene too, but this is the end of the exact scene I’ve been sharing)
A vaguely familiar masculine voice…not very familiar, but familiar regardless.
A blue-eyed, blonde-haired man in a US Army unifor…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @anyone-else
Part 2 of the scene I shared🤭 (and this still isn’t all of it…still working on it atm)
Franz’s gaze didn’t stray from Riker’s. “I thought you were dead…we all did.”
Riker’s back pressed against the wall.
He should never have left the Altmann home in a rush.
E…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
my loyal subjects, I beg pardon.
Tragedy has struck.
The dragon laptop ate LOS for breakfast! 😱
I was able to recover most of it, but alas I must be away to other duties.
No new sections until Monday. 😭
🐲
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @whalekeeper@loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @theducktator and @liberty @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @grcr
Everyone I can think of! I just got a random person I met on YouTube to join Kingdom pen!!!!! She is a Christian writer! Just like us!!!!! We met in the…[Read more]
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@theducktator @hybridlore @keilah-h
Thanks for still praying! Yeah, I am also glad it wasn’t that bad, and thanks for understanding!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Lololol.
Huh, that’s funny. I guess there is a sort of connection there.
I just find the whole idea of his story interesting, and the different ways he has gone about fighting the slave-trade.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
*gaspeth*
CHEATER!!!
🤣
Although, why did he change his name?
Hmm. wouldn’t you like to know.
Wow! Really? Well then, lucky Ian.
btw, what do you think of their new owner, Kareem Omar?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Did you see it coming that it would be Rolf, or did that catch you by surprise?
Oh what? Now your loyalties have shifted?!! I see. So is Ian the new favorite?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!
Time passed, and Leon’s wounds began to heal, leaving deep scaring in many places. However, his strength was harder to regain. Without good food, and surviving on only two meals a day, he had already begun to weaken. After the beating and…
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h @esther-c @hybridlore @theducktator @theshadow
Thank you all for praying! It means everything to me! But I do have some good news and bad news! I feel really bad, because I feel like I lied to you all and made you all stress over nothing, but it was a misunderstanding… Her friend said a word similar to *that word*… but it wasn’t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Lolol. you seemed pretty convinced…… 😂
Well, the overseers are cruel and they picked Ian as their target. They want him to live in the absolute terror that he could slip up any moment and that would be the end. It’s a terror that drives him crazy. He already had that rebellious spark and a sort of fire about him to begin with,…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Cole texting Sara, and then her dismissing it.
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Thanks…
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@theducktator @theducktator @hybridlore
Thank you all for praying… she is doing fine.
But @anyone… the thing with my little sister was just out of concern, but if anyone could pray for my cousin and her friend…
I don’t want to say the exact word for it… but her friend was…. R****… and if you still don’t understand… it is what…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
I read your latest section. It was good! I left you a few comments on the file. I feel like Cole is going to start getting a little more involved soon.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!
The first thing he knew was the pain. He couldn’t remember having ever been in such terrible pain. Then he felt that he was lying on something softer than the ground, and someone was bathing his back with cool water.
“Will he be alright?” a…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@esther-c (why didn’t I take you before, you literally write contemporary!!)
First of all, make sure you’re reading contemporary!!! Especially within the little genres that you want to focus on.
Ooh, okay that’s a good idea. I’ll try that, do you have any book suggestions?
I previously read a YA novel that took place in the 80s and am current…
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Great, I’ll read it tomorrow and let you know what I think of it.
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