hybridlore

@hybridlore

Wait really!!!!

*jumps around cheering*

Yahoo!!!!

@whalekeeper

I’m confused…what gave you the impression that Sef is stronger than most people the Pythonos use? that wasn’t my intent at all…

The whole point of the chapter was to show more of her weaknesses and now I’m confused XDXD

My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot

@savannah_grace2009

I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.

@keilah-h

Oh, I write all of the above plus some. idk. The MC is a teenage guy in most of it, but then so were Joseph and Aaron. 🤷🏼‍♀️

@ellette-giselle lol

I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.

@keilah-h

Aw thank you so much!!! I can’t wait. Yay! One member has joined the team!

What do your brothers love so much about it?

I hope you can discover that, because I don’t know…………

What do your brothers love so much about it?

@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @rae @raxforge yeah! I’d love to join this.

all right, time to answer the questions:

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I think your protagonists were the best.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

I do agree with Hybridlore that since Fox was the…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah it was pretty short hahaha

thank youuu

@savannah_grace2009

That was a short chapter, but pretty good!

@theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @grcr

I just released a new chapter…(chapter 35) and I’d just like some thoughts on it lol

so if you want to read it…

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

QUESTIONS!

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

THANK YOUUU (: