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@keilah-h

I’ve been mostly good, thanks for asking

What about you?

Also aren’t we all lunatics about certain characters lol

@keilah-h ikr? About time😂

@esther-c

heh

heh

heh

 

y’all don’t wanna know what I have planned for Riker AND Leon

hehehe

😭

 

@koshka Indeed!

Yess, indeed, the poor man still needs a lot of help <3

Ty for reading and your kind thoughts!! 💖💖

 

@savannah_grace2009

ME TOOOOO 💖💖💖💖 *hugs Riker tight*

Awww, girl, I’m so glad you’re doing…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

🫣

I may have to get braces…that sounds horrible

 

Now I really don’t want them😂 but I also want straight teeth; such conflicting feelings.

I wanted Invisalign, but apparently my mouth isn’t big enough for all of my teeth to even fit in my head, so I’ll probably have to get braces and spacers 😅 I meannn, I had a dentist tell me…[Read more]

@theshadow

You should!! It’s called Billy Joe McGuffrey Theatrical version.

@esther-c

Thanks! It’s from my dad’s dad joke book.

@trailblazer

Thanks!! The foreshadowing and pacing in this book is definitely stretching me and it’s been a learning curve, but I’m slowly figuring it out. (I think… XD)

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!!

Um… practice? I don’t know, but honestly it’s just practice. XD Now I will confess, I used to throw tons of action tags on dialogue an…[Read more]

@theducktator

I love your signature 🤣

@whalekeeper ooof.

I have braces, but they’re the clear plastic ones that come on and off. I think I made the right choice with that instead of the metal ones.

@whalekeeper

Ugh, braces are the worst. 😖

@theducktator @koshka @keilah-h

Brace adjustments XDXD They put in these rubber bands two days ago and now I can’t chew.

Okay, keep in mind most of these are optional! I’ll make sure to note which ones are grammatically necessary, and you can assume anything else is just to give the reader’s eye a rest where it is the most logical.

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CHAPTER 1-LAXAN INVASION

!0,015 GA. The city of Laxan on the planet Laxor…

Billowing smoke filled the air. Lava spewed from t…[Read more]

@theshadow

Alas, we don’t have the dvd. Maybe I’ll get it from the library. Have you ever listened to the full length Billy Joe McGuffrey?

@rae

All your replies are noted ;P

I saw somewhere that you have trouble with paragraph breaks. I love sequencing sentences, especially dialogue sentences, so I’ll give you some suggestions here in just a sec.

@whalekeeper ugh eating anything with only your front teeth is a real pain.

@whalekeeper

You have never known true pain and dedication, unless you have been forced to eat bacon with your front teeth only.

But why???????

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness Min they are SO adorable🥰🥰  I love your writing so much girl!!! <3

 

And I’m so sorry I haven’t been very active😭 I have started trying to write more frequently so I’ll hopefully be on more <33

Sorry, but I have to let out my feelings somewhere

You have never known true pain and dedication, unless you have been forced to eat bacon with your front teeth only.

@linus-smallprint

Cool! Good to know; thank you for clarifying ;P

*Happily watching*