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@ellette-giselle

Are you using a normal arc structure/your own structure based off what you know about arcs? Or just thinking through the arc as you write?

@linus-smallprint haha yeah Microsoft’s day calendar thingy can be useful sometimes….

and ha I didn’t even notice that with Alan and Oliver in the beginning.

@otherworldlyhistorian I have absolutely NO idea what you’re talking about but it seems like you enjoyed it! And the character arcs sound cool.

@whalekeeper

yes.

@ellette-giselle

Have you outlined LTBL?

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

New scene!

Asher and Eric were only the first of many war orphans who found shelter in the orphanage. On the second day of the two brother’s arrival, a girl came by saying her mother had felt led to give them some children’s clothing and she hoped Sabina could find someone who needed them. Aft…

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@linus-smallprint

Ooo, we haven’t met the Kunulfs yet. If they go after Alan (and Oliver) for being lefthanded you can use their terror to scare the reader.

Ok, I’m done giving un-asked for ideas.

Sorry.

😀

@linus-smallprint

By the way, I discovered today is Lefthanders day (according to Microsoft at least). What a coincidence!

But then that makes right-handers day ALL THE OTHER days of the year!!! 😀

@linus-smallprint

When you say you don’t have much to say, you mean it. lol.

Don’t you find it a little funny that Aaron is the one to bring the kids back after being the strongest opposer of the idea?

also I added some today. Including one of the most hilarious scenes from the video I pulled the bread tumor plot from (IDK how familiar you are with the official animations)

@Esther-c

Ooo…. They sound cool! 😃😄

@keilah-h

😊 Thanks. Yeah, they definitely need some development. I can’t wait to see how all three of them react in a situation like this and with each other.

@esther-c don’t, they’re cool.

the whole point of this is to develop the characters by having them interact with each other.

@keilah-h

Awesome!

I kinda feel bad for dumping three new characters on y’all. 🤭

@esther-c cool!!

I think I’m just gonna keep Crosshair here, same as @freed_and_redeemed‘s doing with Riker and Leon.

Just gonna share the link to my brain dump so y’all can see their face claims:

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGK2MbtfP0/KPlD9Kd9oXRqccbAcP3vCw/edit?utm_content=DAGK2MbtfP0&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

@theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @grcr @theducktator

M’kay! I’ve decided on another character duo! (Actually three characters, but I’m only gonna write from the POV of two of them) I need practice writing these guys since I don’t normally do first person, but their novel is going to be completely in first!

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@ellette-giselle haha yeah

@keilah-h

Yeah, I know. it’s horrid.

Anyhow, we’ll see what Linus decides to do with all this info. lol