hybridlore

@hybridlore

Okay, so I have a question. Would you have still called it if Amelia hadn’t brought up wanting a baby in the letter to Sabina?

Did you call it the whole time, or was there any point that you actually thought she was sick.

Should I cut out the baby part in the letter to make this scene more stressful, or no?

 

Oh boy… this is n…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Right. Ellette told me.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

12/28/24

Section 1.

(hopefully that will make it easier for anyone behind to organize these parts.) 😉

if this section was too long, then I can cut them down. Just let me know.

NEXT SECTION

The next morning, Joseph awoke to the banging of the back do…

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@freed_and_redeemed

This is good! I like this scene!

Wait, hang on……. you got him stuck there and now you don’t know what to do?!?!

Haha…… I may or may not have done that to a character before………

Honestly, George doesn’t seem very stable at the moment, If Riker gets out of the room and George follows and trips over something…[Read more]

Oh and thanks! It’s great to see you and I love your pfp

girl I envy your art skills

I wish so bad sometimes that I could draw my OCs but sadly I am incapable

and unwilling to put in the effort that it takes to get there 😅

@mineralizedwritings
yeah honestly I don’t know the technical quote

I think what you said sounds more right lol but overall I just thought it was weird and then the conversation he later had with ultron he also gave off the weird god vibes (more than Thor lol)

@smiley

Hey girl good to see you back!

“I wasn’t created by Stark or Ultorn I am… I am” which as a Christian I know is a nod to the Old Testament when God tells Moses to tell the Israelites “I Am sent you”

if he actually says that then that’s kinda offensive lol. I think I might remember him saying ‘I am who I am’ but I can’t remember. Yeesh.

@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae @euodia-vision @freed_and_redeemed

Hello, I’m back!!! Yall it’s been a while and I don’t know I guess I missed it again and I had a new fanfic idea and I was just ready to say hi again

To be honest, KP can easily become an idle to me but I also enjoy having rambles with you guys so I’m gonna try to keep…[Read more]

@liberty

Gotcha. Wow. It’s so sad writing about villains…especially their background. Does…*gulp* Hans have any redemption later on? *hopeful eyes*

I’m afraid not 😔

What @ellette-giselle said about him having several chances and accepting none of them is correct

@ellette-giselle @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else

Not quite sure where to take this scene after where it ends, so if anyone has any ideas, pls let me know😅

a scene snippet from Book #3 🤫 I didn’t realize these characters I spontaneously came up with would play a bigger role in…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Happy Belated Birthday! 🎂🎊🎈

Thank you!

I have finished the book. I was tearing up at the end. Charles was one of my favorites. I still haven’t given up hope that he will be saved in the next book, even though I know he won’t. That hymn was so beautiful and definitely fitting. I’ll try to get to the questions soon, but it…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint lol that raccoon

@linus-smallprint

You’re very welcome.

Also, why does that racoon picture have an expression that so fits what I know of you? lolololol.

@linus-smallprint

I have the same thought as Hybrid here. Beric has not only been independent for a while now, but he is also a teen. I’m glad you included the scene of his struggle to listen.

Thanks. It actually wasn’t in the first or second draft. I had a reference made to it in the third, but I thought I should flush it out into a full s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Sounds good!

I’ll see if I can get at least one of your new sections done today.

Wonderful!! Thanks! Looking forward to it!

@linus-smallprint

Also, what about Andrew Peterson’s Carry the Fire? We both agreed on that one.

Okay yeah, we did. That one is a great song.

Oh, looks like you mentioned the editor question. Ignore my second offer. I thought you might have missed it.Glad you found a good person for the job!

😉

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know how to send doc. links. so, here are my answers.

The Narrow Path Trilogy: Book One – The Cost Feedback Questions

Character

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Alan. Because he was the redemption character, and I LOVE redemption characters. If you look at my…[Read more]

@whalekeeper yess Tyn is awesome

IDK why, I just like her.

Oliver is my other favorite but that’s probably cause he’s an Australian lizard and you know how I feel about both of those things.