hybridlore

What do your brothers love so much about it?

@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @rae @raxforge yeah! I’d love to join this.

all right, time to answer the questions:

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I think your protagonists were the best.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

I do agree with Hybridlore that since Fox was the…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah it was pretty short hahaha

thank youuu

@savannah_grace2009

That was a short chapter, but pretty good!

@theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @grcr

I just released a new chapter…(chapter 35) and I’d just like some thoughts on it lol

so if you want to read it…

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

QUESTIONS!

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

THANK YOUUU (:

@whalekeeper

I need to think a little more, and I’ll be sure to tag you when I have something!

@grcr

Thanks girl! IT HAS BEEN A WHILE!!!!! I’ve missed you *hugs*

@theducktator

First of all, girl, I love you so much 😂😂💜😭

You’re the best and your personality is actually such a vibe hahaha

I appreciate you so much, you make me smile <3

The thing is, if I make myself write as a routine, it will seem like a chore. Plus life is very crazy and uncertain because of all the stuff with my mom and I don’t want to…[Read more]

@jonas

Okay I’m in!!!!

I need some MOTIVATION

@highscribeofaetherium @theducktator

Thank you so much <3

@theducktator @whalekeeper

Melissa

“I goeth out of this tunnel… -eth” Mel wiggled the rest of the way out and retrieved her stick, which she had left by the burrow’s entrance. She looked the girl who had just appeared up and down with her flashlight.

“You talk funny. But I like your cape. I’m Mel.”

@loopylin

Ayla

I was trying to decide whether to pretend I was in the Triwizard Tournament or under King Minos’ castle when I noticed a tunnel. I knelt down and peered into it, wishing I had a light. A small girl stared back.

“Hark! A human! Greetings, fellow wander! Whither goest thou?” Hopefully whither was correct. I never could remember the…[Read more]

I’m having more fun writing this imp guy than my actual characters lol

@whalekeeper

Melissa

As Mel followed the rabbit, it began picking up speed, and she found herself jogging to keep up with it.

There was something up ahead. A thin line across the path, reflecting silver in her flashlight beam. Mel slowed slightly, hopped over it, and continued running. Ahead, the rabbit turned suddenly right, and disappeared…[Read more]