hybridlore

@elishavet-pidyon

She’s my favorite, may I have mercy on her soul. XD

I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?

Yes, he’s Dali. I call Lucille’s mum by her name as well. It feels more humanizing to call him that in this story rather than calling him ‘her dad’ or Dad.

I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it…

[Read more]

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

Theme song for Jonathan in current stage of arc and somewhat forward.

@hybridlore

Oh, I forgot that chapter ended there. 🙃

Yeah, they’ve turned in plenty of people. For Jonathan’s parents it was more Agent retaliation. We’re here to pick up the kid. You don’t have the kid? Fine, you pay for it. That sort of thing.

@hybridlore

what was sweet?

No, the gang was not involved in that one. They were killed because they hid Jonathan.

@ellette-giselle

:] Mayhaps I will post more when desire returns.

@loopylin

Is Enid your friend?

“Yeah, she’s… yeah.”

No, I’ve never been on one of those. We have cars and, like, normal buses.

“Huh. At first I was going to say that sounds tedious, but I can’t talk like that when sky trams are so undependable.”

What do the buildings in your city look like?

“Imagine every building had three or four stories at l…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

woah! That was crazy!

Thanks for sharing!!!

I hesitated for like ten minutes before pushing the submit button. I don’t know how some of you guys do this regularly. :’-)

@loopylin @rae @koshka @ellette-giselle @theducktator

Yaay, I actually have a self-contained snippet to share. This is pre-teen Barnes, in case you’re not sure who she is.

The typewriter clicked to a stop, its keys fluttering up and down like the legs of an overturned insect. Lucille opened her eyes. The sun glared through her eyelashes, turning…

[Read more]

@loopylin

and now I’m really sad but also weirdly motivated to get some writing done.

Be sad then!! *Shakes you to make you write more* I need a Lois x Fel scene as soon as you can deliver.

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

@rae Praying for you! 🙏🏻🩷

@esther-c

Okay that makes sense…I’ll keep reading and waiting for more and I’ll let you know if I come up with anything else!

@hybridlore

Yes. I did.

Well, you could….. I’d just have to write it……

@hybridlore

I do two chapters each day and then post them. I may jump the gun today so that I have some fallback though.

@hybridlore

This is draft number…… 7. I think.

I wrote this when I was 13 and have done rewrites almost every year since. This time I scrapped the draft and started over completely since I know the story inside and out. I feel like I can breathe again and it’s going much better.

@hybridlore

Do you!!? I like him too. 😁

I’m so glad you like it. I’m actually also starting to like it as well.

Any thoughts about the new situation Jonathan is in? Also, out of curiosity, what makes you like Jim? (I like him, but i know his whole arc. I’m interested to see what you like. )

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much for this! It was really helpful!

btw, Tintin is THE BEST. 😁

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!!

Thank so much for all the help you have given. I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it!! I shall take a look now.

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

( @kyronthearcanin       @jonas      @power )

CHAPTER 7 and 8!!!!