hybridlore

@ellette-giselle @koshka

I’m here, you can connect with Barnes and get moving together.

@koshka

Rory

“I said cracked, not punctured… or broken…” Rory mumbled, but he let Leo help him to the door. They slipped outside into the cool night. Rory took in a slow breath and blinked, looking around him at the dim streets. I wonder if the agents are still out here? The thought made him grip Leo tighter. “Which direction?” And before…[Read more]

@koshka

If we involve Barns we have to stop RPing until she replies.

Ya know, we could just go out the back door which she’s not guarding, and then if whaley still wants to join us it would be an easy thing for Barnes to find us again.

Rory

Rory shook his head and put his hand against the wall, slowly pushing himself up. “I’m fine. I’ll…[Read more]

@theducktator

Great! I’m ready to get hit.

@koshka

“I… I don’t know where… all over…” Rory blinked several times. Leo’s hands were against his face. “I feel sick,” Rory grimaced. He wasn’t sure if it was the emotions, the spent adrenaline, or the amount of times he had been hit. “The Agents had me back there,” he said slowly. He rubbed the back of his hand over his eyes, smearing…[Read more]

@koshka

Rory

Rory followed Leo’s gaze and saw the picture of a young man. He looked weary and depressed. He was making his way down a dusty road, his head bowed. But, just beyond him, a man was running down the front walk of a grand mansion, his arms open wide. Rory leaned on his arm, and his eyes drifted back to the picture of the shepherd. He…[Read more]

@liberty

I will have 24 snowballs soon, and then people will suffer!😈

@hybridlore

Lol, it does sound like that. It’s a Christmas song.

…Do we need more snowballing? I still have ten ready and available for flinging… 😈

@hybridlore

Sure thing! I haven’t been snowballed in a while though…it actually looks like there’s not much snowballing anymore!

@koshka

(I’m gonna cry! I want a Leo in my life! Where’s my Leo? 😭)

Rory

Something inside Rory broke at Leo’s words and tears spilled down his face. Not the violent, desperate, broken sobs he had cried before, but gentle tears. The way Leo’s hand rested on the shoulder, the way it had felt against his forehead–– Rory had never known any…[Read more]

@keilah-h

THE FIRST ONE!!

Talk about that after you PUBLISH the book! You’ve read it a thousand times and so has your editor, you both read the first printed copy, catch all those mistakes, and then you make the big order and start selling them, only to see mistakes! *sobbing*

@trailblazer

I agree! I also think it’s important for the children to see their parents doing those things, too, because they imitate what is modeled to them (especially young children).

Totally!

@theducktator lol it’s a stylistic thing, I think.

Yay, Wyoh didn’t eat those words! You have no idea how glad I am. *sweats*

@linus-smallprint

I have… a lot of feedback. *coughs*

Thank you Linus for giving me access to this story! I have a lot of thoughts and I hope they can be of some use to you! Obviously these are my opinions, so use them as you will. 🙂

Characters:

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Love Tyn. H…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I had a school book once with that analogy. A couple more: The boat gently drifted across the pond exactly the way a bowling ball wouldn’t. She walked into a room like a centipede with 98 missing legs.

This person was writing a fan fiction about something and went into a research rabbit hole lol