@hybridlore
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Yeah, I gotcha. But it did catch me off guard.
I feel like he won’t … but I could be wrong. And if he betrayed them, he probably wouldn’t come back.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
The new section looks good too! It did confuse me when, in the letter, they mentioned that Jews were not better than Greeks. This seems kind of out of place in your fantasy world. Maybe cut that sentence, or you could put, Ardentans are not greater than those of the Empire? Or something like  that.
Anyway, good job! I’m ro…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
The new section looks good. Sorry, I was at co-op and then had a lot of notifs when I got back so it was a little overwhelming.
Whatever happened to the prince. . . *shudders* Creepy. Hopefully Leon and Julian will get to talk to him soon.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months ago
That’s terrible. Praying!! 🙏
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Also, I am dying for a protective older brother moment somewhere. 😂
I’ll see if I can put that in there somewhere… I’m sure there’ll be an opportunity. 😉😊
Liam totally counts, I just forgot him. 😢
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Great!
Also… don’t hurt Everett please!!
Lol. Three of them want me to make him suffer 🤨 My plan hasn’t changed, though. There are challenges ahead, but more for Sara and Cole. And Alec.
*smiles and nods* yes, put those characters through the fire, and we’ll see on the other side who were the true ones, and who wer…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
I count six that Ellette has killed…
but pretty much everyone in her books has almost died at least once.ÂI want to see him put to the test, and I want to see him face consequences for that choice, even though he chose the right thing, and I want to watch him struggle through and stand firm in that!
I just want yo…
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hybridlore replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 2 months ago
I don’t think so… Like I said, I’d have to look at it.
Yeah, maybe try.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Yay, the bonus section!! XD
The part where Julian says he has to stay in his room and then two sentences later says he might go downstairs was a little confusing.
I thought he was going to be sick for longer than that—I don’t know, just seemed like something you would do.
Nice to see Joseph and his family mentioned again. I m…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h
What did I just come back to? Why do you all want me to beat up Everett? 🥺
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hybridlore replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 2 months ago
Huh, weird. The tag box underneath the message one doesn’t do anything.
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hybridlore replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 2 months ago
Test
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hybridlore replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 2 months ago
Weird. I’ll have to look into it—I really don’t know if it’s a great option or not, but I remembered it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 2 months ago
I do also know that if you create a website on Blogger or Wix, something like that, I think there’s an option to create a forum. I’ve never tried it before, but I could look into it if y’all would prefer that to a closed chat.
It would still technically be open to people on the internet, but the link would have to be shared for them to acces…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Okay! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
That’s because you don’t know his full story.
I know his life, and I know that it was the completion of his character arc.
Well, okay, maybe. 😝
technically I should make you wait for tomorrow…….. but I am feeling rather nice today………
*gasps* A bonus section?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
😂
That’s crazy. Colorado is kind of notorious for that, I thought, but I’ve never been to your state before.
I don’t kill characters without a reason. I don’t even kill them. My badguys do.
Ahem—I don’t see much of a reason for Conrad’s death. Aaron and Adrian can be explained, I guess, but there’s still lots of other people yo…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Oh no! @liberty beat me! XD
yesterday it was 80 degrees.
Today it’s 5 and snowing.
That’s rather strange . . . 🤔 Sounds like Colorado, but I don’t even think it’s that extreme there. Today we have a high of nearly 80.
He died in the beginning of book 2. Hybridelore almost killed me for it.
(it was a rather brutal scene………
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
You’re totally fine. Thanks! 😁
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