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@savannah_grace2009 @janellebelovedpig
Do you guys think it was an accident? Just really weird, she didn’t say anything about it. And she seemed like she was posting more often, too :/

@trailblazer

Wow, your posts are great! I only read one but you’re very talented!!

@acancello

Thank you!! Yeah, Wix does have that! I don’t know about designing your own background, I had a little bit of trouble with that too but was able to figure the header out. Euodia knows a ton about it, tho! 😁

It did! I like it, yeah. I’ve used blogger in the past so Wix was a little hard to figure out but euodia helped me as well, so I…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, someone was talking about that… Weird! I wonder why?

@esther-c

Looks great, girl! Good job on the boards and the blurb!!

@grcr

Hey, did you ever figure out something for Nanowrimo? I might be able to help with inspo if you still need something, though writing prompts is a great idea!

@euodia-vision @acancello @janellebelovedpig @anyone-else

Hey guys! I recently made a blog, if you guys want to check it out, here’s the link!
https://scifiandapplepie.wixsite.com/my-site

Would love to hear your guys’ thoughts, too!

@fernweh_grace

Oh my goodness XD

@grcr

I really like that board!

@fernweh_grace

XD Yeah, I could see that lol.

@fernweh_grace

No problem! Thanks!

I really like it! XD The toad… Lol.

@savannah_grace2009

I like that a lot better! It’s really up to you, though. Rae had some good feedback!

@trailblazer

Yayy! Looks good! I don’t mind the summary kind of telling, I think it works well for this story.

@esther-c

That’s okay! Thank you!

@mineralizedwritings

I think Katrin needs a goal. even if it isn’t the typical dystopian goal about overtoppleing the government. She can also pursue one goal, then realize she has to reach even higher if you really want to push the climax. Maybe that’s when she gets a little help from side characters, or remembers the things she has learned ove…

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@thearcaneaxiom

I agree with Min and Jonas on everything they said. Resolve of the character will balance the unresolved political structure.However there’s still a lot of things you could do to end it differently. For one thing, most dystopias almost never talk about what happens after they take down the government. They need to reestablish e…

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@grcr

Thank you!

Also, @savannah_grace2009 I was gonna ask, how does she know that Lilitu dreamed exactly what happened to her before he even describes what happens?

@savannah_grace2009

I didn’t really notice it seeming clunky! I like the part where she’s thinking back to playing pretend with her friends, it’s so sweet.

Personally, for the flashback part, I think I would leave it out and give more of like a summary, sort of like:

She knew that this was no ordinary dream. And not just because of his reaction.…

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