hybridlore

@ellette-giselle OOH! Looks cool! 😁

@liberty I would say yes, but it’s kind of fun to watch as they multiply from the original two, and eventually we’ll get to the point where we have a lot flying. So no, sorry. You’re welcome to ask for tags though.

@ellette-giselle

I guess I was sort of confused by Joseph’s fears about talking to Ezra, then. He seems to have multiple flashbacks to the soldiers, which is a good way to show how the events have affected him. I was probably confused (I’m assuming now that this scene is replacing the one before where he talks to three young men) about why he was…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Your new blurb sounds so cool! 😍

@ellette-giselle

I like it a lot! The only things I noticed were that you included the long excerpt from the Bible again… most readers already know the Christmas story so I don’t think you need it in there. Then, also, when Amelia was talking about Mary, some of the tenses seemed wrong. Like, maybe it should be in past tense? Idk. And last thi…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

We need a “pin post” option.

@jonas

That definitely makes sense. When there’s one big group, it’s kind of hard to RP. I’m up for it.

@ellette-giselle Haha I use my phone a good amount of the time. 🤪 It does take some getting used to.

Lolol, that should be the official video of the forum. 😆

@liberty I think Ellette meant to tag you for her answer ☝️

@whalekeeper

Wow. That was kind of confusing without context, but intriguing character. Why is he writing the letter if he knows he won’t go to that college?

@theducktator

Lolol. Is algebra really that bad? 🤪

@ellette-giselle Oh right. 🤦‍♀️ Sorry. I hope you have fun. Are you still away for Thanksgiving?

@ellette-giselle Girl. 😳🫠

When are you going to post the next section?

(I’ll get to the snowball later this afternoon.)

@highscribeofaetherium

Lolol.

You don’t have to post your words, but you’re welcome to if you want. 😉

@ellette-giselle 💨⚪ @esther-c 💨⚪

@godlyfantasy12 @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 (I know, I already talked to you xD)

YOU’RE BACK!!!! 🎉🤗

Praying. 🙏

@the-ducktator That’s okay! I’m glad it wasn’t terrible. Sorry you got a cold, though.

@savannah_grace2009

Yay, another section! 😆 It looks good! I don’t have too much to say about, but I thought Jonas’s critiques were good.