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@liberty

That’s exciting! I’ll have to check her books out!

@whalekeeper

Honestly, I just love them all. 😂 I’m sorry, I know that’s not really helpful.

If you want to share more about the characters, maybe we could try to throw out some more specific ideas?

@ellette-giselle

WHOOOHOO!!! Congrats!!

The ending was so sweet!! 😂 I wasn’t expecting that time jump, but it was fun to see afterward. And the drawing scene… so cute 🥺☺️. I love that he’s teaching it now, even if he can’t do it.

And oh my goodness. Jason and Evan were hilarious in the epilogue. 😂😂😂

I did notice that the very last scene y…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle
oh no… 😭😭😭
Is he really dead?

@ellette-giselle
Oh…. My… goodness.
Rory!!!!
I can’t believe you left us on another cliffhanger! (Well, I can, but still.) 😅
How many more chapters in the book?

@ellette-giselle

No, we didn’t!! (Ok, I thought Cassion might die, but now I think he has a chance!! Jonathan and Michael can get there just in time!)

Augh. 🙄🤣

@ellette-giselle

Another cliffhanger?! 😢😳

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! I did notice there was a sentence in the second to last chapter where you started in Rory’s POV, then swapped to Cassion’s for a brief section. It was like, “Cassion wanted to make sure Rory really understood” or something along those lines.

I really hope the rebels will rescue them. This is getting close.

@ellette-giselle
I’m guessing this will be the climax of the book?

@ellette-giselle
Oh my goodness. I feel so bad for Cassion and Rory… 😭 I feel like it’s inevitable that he’s going to die.

Evan’s decision to fly anyway makes sense. I’m glad you did that.

Jonathan and Amber… 🥰 xD

@ellette-giselle
Good chapters!! I liked how Cassion told Rory about God. Things are getting tense. Evan… 😬🥺

@ellette-giselle
AGG! What was that?!!

Please don’t tell me Rory does it…

@ellette-giselle

Cute moodboard!

Well. Didn’t see that coming.

I’m excited to see how Cassion’s heist goes. 😂

@theducktator

I’m so sorry!! 😢🤗 We’ll be praying!

@theducktator

Those are hilarious!!

@ellette-giselle

I liked the new chapter. It was cute.

PLEASE don’t kill Rory though.

@ellette-giselle

Well… we aren’t at the end of the book yet. 🫣

@ellette-giselle

Yay! KP is back!

Good chapters. They made it out of there pretty easily. I thought that was going to be tough…

@ellette-giselle

Wow! That was so tense! I can’t wait for Cassion to tell them!

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much!

I know some of us were discussing this during the book, but I like the idea of showing Sara and Cole’s closer relationship in the beginning of the book. I’m going to look and see if I can insert this into the early chapters.

I see what you mean about Alec being a pretty stagnant character during the book.…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thank you for the concern, it’s so kind of you! Your right on the money, I have noticed I’ve become a bit obsessive/overly scrupulous about things recently, so as you mentioned I will look into OCD.

No problem! 🙃 I hope you find some helpful material. Just let me know if you want me to link some stuff that’s helped me before! Pra…[Read more]