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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 14 hours ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 14 hours ago
I was going to, but it wouldn’t let me sign in with my alt account and I didn’t want my main on there for all to see.
I don’t think I’ve heard of Equilibrium—is that a movie or a book?
Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 15 hours ago
It was right around when Sara burst out at Jonathan.
I don’t know… I like Don. 😅 And Jonathan.
also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 5 hours ago
It worked!
I liked these chapters. You did a great job of increasing the tension. I did notice that you briefly switched into Sara’s POV during the first chapter, then went back to Jonathan. I would fix that.
Great job!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 9 hours ago
They’re not showing up on the link for me.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 days, 10 hours ago
Gotcha.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 days, 14 hours ago
@savannah_grace2009 Have fun!! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 days, 14 hours ago
I definitely got that difference, but having you explain it helped even more.
Is Jace younger than the others? You described him as a boy multiple times.
Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 4 hours ago
I do all the time and randomly remember during the day. XD
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aIjmMlC28TT3c9eMUpg1-9ASZ71vtWpJMhcSz_dmI_Y/edit?usp=drivesdk
I’ll send the Word link to your email, if you want that one too.
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 6 days, 9 hours ago
Hey Esther!! Nice to see you around again!!
Sounds like a lot of craziness! 😂 How are you liking driving so far? And what new project are you planning to work on first?
I’m doing pretty good! My family moved and so we’ve been settling in and stuff but this week I’m finally starting to finish up my math (hopefully the last math of high schoo…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 9 hours ago
I think we are almost two thirds in?
Okay, sounds good. If needed, you can always catch up after your break.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 10 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator
New chapters are out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 10 hours ago
I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.
One note: I was very…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 days, 10 hours ago
Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?
The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 6 days, 11 hours ago
Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!
I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅
@theducktator Praying!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
I thought it was interesting! The beginning was slightly confusing, because I couldn’t figure out how Cedrick was narrating. But it has a very intriguing premise!
Isaiah seems… questionable, like you said. I would like to see Hana meet him.
If you add to it, please tag me!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 3 days ago
Praying!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
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Hehe, yes, but good craziness nonetheless! I’ve liked it so far! I’m kinda nervous and a little scared, but I’m mostly excited so that kinda overpowers the rest, lol. My brother’s also going off to college in the fall and he had been driving us places sometimes, so it’s almost like a motivation for me to be the new driver in the house (for my o…[Read more]
Yes, that makes total sense! Righttt. I’m just starting to be able to drive my siblings to the grocery store and it’s been fun. 🙂
Oh, awesome! I remember that one. Africa sounds really interesting… 😆
It was fine. We’ve moved plenty of times, and this one was a bit more sad for me, but I like our new house and neighborhood, and we’re starting to…[Read more]
Yes, that’s awesome!
Haha, yeah, I’ll be needing to do a lot of research, but I may save most of it for the end once I’ve gotten the whole story written out.
Good! I’m glad it’s been a pretty easy adjustment for y’all!
Ooh, fun fun! Oh yeah that’s a good idea! Do you have any idea what you want to do after high school yet??
Research, ugh. 😂 I would save it for the end too. XD
I want to write at least part-time, Lord willing!
I’ve also considered teaching violin or working as a librarian on the side. 😊 Do you?