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@queen_of_alvastia

You’re fine! =) It is an interesting tool though, but a hard one all the same.

@queen_of_alvastia

ONLY DO IT IF IT WILL HELP THE STORY! If the book’s good as is I wouldn’t add one just to deepen it.

It may cause trauma you don’t need.

*Weeps*

@godlyfantasy12

I enjoyed that way too much. I mean really, why do I enjoy reading about character deaths? I despise tragic endings, and a book that makes me cry is probably not going to be high on my list of I just want tos.

But that…that was beautiful.

And now I plead for more!!!

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, that’s really the only reason I’m still going through with it.

And the way it all works out is just so beautiful to this author.

@freedomwriter76

And this is why you can’t let that happen!!!!!!

@freedomwriter76

You said that so much better than me. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Good idea. *Sigh*

Well, the why Oswald dies is…um…to move along the plot by making Mikkel try to commit suicide.

That sounds awful.

And this is why I feel so cold hearted.

There are other reasons…although most of them are about as bad.

@elishavet-pidyon

I already know, so if you want to… 😉

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

Y’all are making me feel so cold hearted. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Oh. No.

That’s…heartbreaking.

And so sweet!!!!

Why would you do that to Grim? Just why?

But no, that is a good character death.

@elishavet-pidyon

Aww…

Confession: I’ve only ever cried over one of my characters and that was because someone else started first.

@freedomwriter76

*Deep shaky breath*

I was pretty sure this was going to happen.

*Sniff*

It’s okay.

I’ve been considering killing Wilkins, but y’all didn’t hear that so…

Hehe…

@godlyfantasy12

*Stares for a moment in stunned silence*

WHAT!?! Nooooooooo……..

What about Nyx?!? What is HE going to do?

Wwwhhyyyyy!!??!

Actually, now I’m curious. Why?

@godlyfantasy12

YES, do tell!

But to make us even, then yes I do have at least one I’ve got figured out, and an almost death.

And none of y’all actually know either of these characters like at all, but anyway.

So, I vaguely referred to this in the RP, but Mikkel has a close, close friend named Oswald who’s the medic for his group in the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

*Staggers back from hooded figure, then rushes forward on bended knee*

“Don’t touch November-Ara-Paxton-Grim-or Luna! PLEASE!!!!”

*Settles back into seat.*

“But, please, do tell.”

@whalekeeper

I hope this will be helpful…

• Loosely plot your book out on note cards, with about how much time in the storyline you think that section should take.
• If things are going to fast, step back and  try writing a character point by point through a scene. Add some description or dialogue.
• If they’re going too slow, look for…

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@whalekeeper

Yep, I’m doubled. =) If you ever have any questions, I can try to answer. (Within reason, of course)

@godlyfantasy12

Would you like to go? =)

@godlyfantasy12

Not exactly. Can we assume my characters get to the top of the window with little incident, and pick as Mikkel steps through the window?

@godlyfantasy12

They’re adorable!

Btw, I may wish to drop another character in here soon, but not till the group kind of shrinks a bit. She’s actually from a novel I haven’t talked a lot about, as it’s not my main WIP. Anyway, all the lovely pics brought her back to mind.