Hullofellowhumans

@elishavet-pidyon

Exactly! The Bible shows many disturbing things, and that is exactly what they should be. Disturbing, NOT intriguing.

Our writing should show the darkness as what it is, both to give boldness because we know our enemy, and a warning to not be like it.

It matters where your focus is. Remember Lot’s wife? Although her feet were…[Read more]

@ava-blue

I’m randomly jumping in, but I did read it so…

For one, that’s a looong paragraph.

For two, there’s a typo in “If I only I could get a backdrop behind der verflixte Elche.”

Anyway, it sounds interesting! Is there more to the story?

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

Riker was kneeling beside his father, white faced. His eyes. So like…

He should never have let this happen. Should never have let his instincts take over.

Never lost control.

Zlatan closed his eyes.

Zlatan, hey, stay here. Don’t get lost in your head.

Blink. Was that h…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

The man looked bad, but the only blood was bright, none of the dark kind Mikkel knew to look for.

He stepped away from Eva, his hands already digging out his kit.

“Riker, please lay him flat on his back.” He knelt beside him. “Does anyone have water? I’m almost out.”

The…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

For a moment silence reigned.

Mikkel blinked.

“Poor fellow. Pity he underestimated his enemy.”

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

White hot fury.

Freezing passion.

Smell of blood.

The world went red.

.

.

He blinked. Franz was on the floor before him.

“I’m sorry.”

He was breathing, a large knot forming over his temple. Thank the Maker, he wasn’t killed.

Riker looker up his eyes wide.

“I’m sorry.”

@wilder-w
Let it shine
Let it shine
Let it shine!
Uh, =)

@godlyfantasy12

It’s fine! I like long ones, although I usually can’t write them.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon

I KNOW!! He’s come so far…he has scars NO one knows about, besides the parents of the children those scars saved.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

If anyone else gets something in before me, ignore this please.

Zlatan

The man struck Riker.

Just like that.

This was not how a father should act.

This was like someone else Zlatan knew all to well.

He never felt himself moving. One moment he was standing behind Rikker. The next…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank you.

Oh dear. Crosshair and Zlatan. That may not work out well. Which it totally fine. XD

@wilder-w

Oh dear. Why do I write?

Because if I didn’t my head would explode from the pressure of keeping all these tales inside it?

Probably not.

But then again, maybe?

Hmm…

I write because I want to reach, to become a light house to some storm caught vessel, and I write clean because I want this light to shine clear. And besides I wo…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aw, thank you! I love them too. *Sniff*

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

This man was mad. Or from some strange South Kingdom. There was no other explanation for such a display of anger.

Or perhaps he had been drinking something far stronger than water.

Father. 

Riker had called him Father.

Zlatan sheathed his blade, freeing his hands if needed.…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

Someone was coming. Mikkel switched off the safety, his mind switching with it.

A sword drew beside him, another in behind, one pistol was out.

Rikker hadn’t drawn his weapon, though his fingers wrapped around it, knuckles white.

Strange.

@freedomwriter76

And this is quite random, but I just realized the twins have a Russian accent (it’s their mother tongue). Would any of your characters recognize it?

@godlyfantasy12

It’s okay. Thank you.

Aha! Definitely! Nyx stuck with black haired Zlatan…XD

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan totally needs to get separated from his brother, and maybe Vulkasin needs it too.

@godlyfantasy12

I think I’m okay now. The writer’s block was mostly situational (we had a family funeral, and I’ve been a little numb).

@freedomwriter76

Oh no…this could be bad y’all.

So, what’s the plan? Which characters get thrown together when the group gets split?