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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Ahhh!!! I didn’t see any of those three scenes. The brothers’ scene is just…
And then Leon and his family! And Riker!
I already despised Hans, so I can’t say much more about him. Ugh.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
He let Snow down and took his hand. “Not quite like Leo. He has a fresh wound, but I’m already healing.”
“If only you would.” Vulkasin muttered, his arms crossed.
“B-but why are…are you h-hurt?”
Zlatan glanced away. “It’s no’fing much.”
“V’hat?!” His brother started beside him. F…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
By the way, I don’t know if either of y’all know this, but if you want to see if someone is on or not you can go to the community page and scroll all the way to the bottom. It isn’t always quite accurate, but it is a way to check. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
AWWWW!!! *Sobs*
Zlatan
“I…I forgive you.” Paxton looked up at him, his eyes filling with tears before he buried his head in Zlatan’s stomach.
I forgive you.
Zlatan gently lifted the boy in his arms, spreading instant fire across his shoulders. Those wounds had been for children, and somehow, he…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic What’s your favorite snack to eat while writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Exactly! Only for me it’s more like Mama coming over to me and asking if I’m okay, because I’ve just been staring off at nothing with a very serious expression on my face. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Yes, Zlatan is gold, Vulkasin greeny-yellow.
Zlatan
Soft arms wrapped around him, pulling him back from the black cell. He opened his eyes to see Paxton looking up at him. He swallowed.
But what was the little lad saying? That everything would be fine, that he shouldn’t be…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Zlatan was…weeping?! The group stopped.
His brother hardly ever showed much emotion, or at least not like most people. And he would never cry.
Vulk started to reach for his brother’s shoulder, then quickly recoiled remembering just in time. He but his lip, at a total loss…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
AGH! *Gasp* You did it alright.
Paxton, you’re so sweet…Please don’t get scared about what’s about to happen.
Zlatan
No. Oh no.
The little boy was looking up at him with those blue blue eyes. “A-Are y-you h-hurt…?”
You can’t lie to a child.
A child.
Just childre…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Btw y’all, at this point in Zlatan’s story children are likely to shake him up. A lot. I sort of forgot that a minute ago, but we may have a major break down ahead.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
AMICAI!!!!!! *Sob*
Those poor hands too… I’m probably going to cry over your books whenever they get published. And I practically never cry over books.
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Koshka replied to the topic What’s your favorite snack to eat while writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Ooooo…I have no idea. I usually come up with my story stuff either randomly staring off at nothing, or trying to do something I should definitely focus on but don’t really want to. But that wasn’t the question, although it may explain my answer.
I usually write whenever I am suddenly attacked by an overloading creative brain, so… I…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
The young man beside him–Reuben was it?–smiled, his eyes suddenly turning concerned.
“Are you…are you alright?”
Absolutely perfect, thank you.
The bindings on his back had loosened a bit, and he’d obviously reopened several gashes.
But that wasn’t to the purpose. It wasn’…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
“Do you know anywhere we can go?”
The group suddenly turned to him, waiting. Zlatan frowned and sucked in as full a breath he could manage. Then lay full length on the floor, ear pressed to the ground, eyes closing.
Distant footsteps. A slight vibration below them, pro…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Ugh! Oh! That…Corvina!! And November!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
He stopped a few paces behind Grimm. How horribly exposed he felt without a Volk’s regular armor.
The group before him had been standing ready to fight, but this little boy’s reaction seemed to have frozen them in place. Snow…
Zlatan quietly sheathed his blade, breath…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I am!
[Zlatan’s picked up a bit of medical knowledge from the camps if Leo still needs it, although it is medieval battle medicine. Nothing weird or stupid like leeches, bloodletting, and nightshade (seriously, medieval doctors needed some common sense), just not our level of efficiency.]
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Koshka replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Alright, two things:
One: @freedomwriter76 I am so glad I did not see this earlier. Now Wolfgang is gonna be okay! (Right?)
Two: @godlyfantasy12 Lynn! Grimm! Nyx! To be honest I was sorta wondering about those pics. (How are you bringing her back, if you don’t mind sharing?)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I forgot about the elf part! That will definitely come into play. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
Furónip?
Whatever it was for quite the reaction out of the fox-lad. Grimm simply held him by the scruff at arms length, a satisfied smirk touching his mouth. Something about the way those two interacted…
Silent laughter welled up inside him, making his eyes dance in an otherwise s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
And I couldn’t find the last reply, so I’m trying to go off what I remember.
Annia
“How lovely! My home has a garden, but most of it is wheat, then vegetables against the house. It used to have flowers, back before.”
Ivy danced in a window nearby, sending patterns of green and gold over the…[Read more]
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