Tobias Hrothgar

@annika-c

That’s awesome!  I play basketball for my school, too.  I love it! 😍  I ran cross country once but it wasn’t my favorite…  I want to do track and field in spring next year too.

Wow, great job!  I was going to do NaNoWriMo this year, but I was too busy with school.  Hopefully I can do it in July.

To Trinidad and Tobago when I was…[Read more]

@annika-c

I’ve never read it, but I guess I’ll have to now!! 😋

@annika-c

Oops, wrong tag 😬

My real tag is @nova21

(I’m on another forum on a different website and i use that tag–sorry)

@annika-c

hey!!  Nice to meet you, I’m Ella.  (Btw, you can tag people by copying and pasting the handle underneath someone’s username–e.g.  mine is @writergirl101)

I’ve read Wings of Fire and Keeper of the Lost Cities!!  I love them!  My personal favorites are The Maze Runner series by James Dashner, The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins, and…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Two worlds, one light and one dark, collide in the mind of their Keeper:  the cat.  

Would your character rather find their true love or a suitcase with five million dollars inside?

Cassie & Isaac both want the money, but they end up with each other 😂 #writershavemorefun

@gracie-j

Would your character rather be a slave or the only non-magic user in a magical world?

@devastate-lasting

Would your character rather spend…[Read more]

@gracie-j

Well, I’m kinda going back to the drawing board over break.  I definitely struggle with committing and finishing. 😏

@devastate-lasting    Once a year, the sun lines up with the Giving Tree, and once a year, under it’s rustling leaves, a miracle happens.  

@gracie-j

Oh my gosh, that’s impressive!!!!!!!!

@gracie-j

I’m thankful for this great writing community, too!!  I’m also thankful for Thanksgiving break, which gives me time to actually write during the school year!!! 😂

@annika-c

That’s awesome!!

Well, I’m in the idea stage right now, still coming up with cool stuff for two different book ideas:  fantasy, and thriller/post-apocalyptical. 😊  The basic premises are a little challenging to come up with now, but I can try:

#1–fantasy:  The cultures in this are based off of the ancient Viking, Roman, Eg…[Read more]

@annika-c

Welcome!!  Your story sounds intriguing. 😃  Wow, 65k words!  Since it’s on it’s fourth draft, do you think it’ll be finished soon?

<p style=”text-align: left;”>@scoutfinch180</p>
I’m on both forums, so I knew that I would do that, haha!! 😁  Yes, I meant KP, but said SE.

1st section:

1)  I like the opening sentence 😉

2)  In the second paragraph, I think it would flow better if you shortened some of the sentences by omitting unnecessary words/details or splitting the sentences into two sentences

3)  “The loud whirring of the distant, useless generator breaking broke the howling of the wind through jagged pea…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Hey!!  I was thinking I could look through each post if you wanted me to and proofread each separately (so I don’t write all the changes in one long post).  Sound good?

@writerlexi1216

Hello!!  Welcome to KP!  I’m Ella and I used to be homeschooled, but now I go to a classical Christian school.  I loooovve cats, working out, basketball, listening to music, and writing thriller/suspense/dystopian books.  My cat is a brindle named Jasmine and she’s super sassy! 😂

I know everyone’s asked you a lot of questions alr…[Read more]

Would your character rather be able to have extreme jumping skills or be able to maneuver every maze?

Isa:  maneuver every maze

Andrew: extreme jumping skills

New question:

Would you rather go on a cruise on the fjords in Norway or go to the Caribbean?