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@loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon

Awesome! I’ll put Celarent and Ryla in tomorrow. Should I just pick teams for them?

@loopylin

To: Mellissa Thompson, my secret hideout, the In Between place

From: Angelita, 4647 Flambert Lane, Dingyville, Maryland, The United States

Dear Mel,

That pool sounds scary. What is an inbetween place? How do you get to one? Were there frogs at that weird indoor pool? Frogs are way less gross than boys. FROGS don’t leave their u…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.

Thanks.

But stubborn me still hates it (it’s a me problem, I am genuinely thankful)

Also, I really, reall…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

Gabriel nodded, his jaw tight, knowing Lucy couldn’t get there in time. He judged the distance, and the closeness of the crows, but before he finished thinking, he sheathed his daggers and scooped Lucy up, apologizing, remembering how she kicked him last time. Then he ran for what felt like the m…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

oh for sure!!

@rae

Lucille

Lucy did not run without the Protector. She grabbed his arm and yanked him forward, pointing. “No – Th-that way!”

The tower had an opening at the base – a scuffed metal lid. She hadn’t noticed it before and now it was far from them both. But the crows’ shadows grew around them and the Protector surely couldn’t fight them off. He…[Read more]

I have never felt so called out

@rae

It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.

It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.

@whalekeeper

It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

It, indeed, was Lucy. She tumbled unceremoniously from the mass of black feathers. The crow shifted its attention from the shiny silver, to her, and she ran, the crow chasing after her.

Gabriel’s blades were out in a moment, boots digging into the ground as he r…[Read more]

@rae

Aw man… If it’s any consolation to you, I enjoy reading your rps! You’re doing a great job and if you’re frustrated with something, whatever it is, usually that means you’re getting better.

Lucille

Lucy tumbled over the crow’s back and landed on the ground. The crow’s focus shifted and it instantly chose to stride toward her.

There w…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The problem is not what I want to write, I just genuinely hate my writing style right now.

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

As the crows above cackled and argued, Gabriel’s attention was drawn to something silver falling from the tower. A crow dived after it, and among its black feathers was a spot of color on its back. Gabriel cal…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

oh Sara! I’m so sorry that she died, yet I’m also so glad that you have begun to find joy in Christ, even in this hard time! I was praying that God would give you peace and joy, and it looks like He is answering that prayer. I will continue to pray for you and your family. It really is hard, I know. I am still walking with a f…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so sorry, Sara, but I’m so glad that Jesus has been comforting you during this time! It is truly amazing to hear of how the Lord is taking care of you right now. You’re in our prayers *hugs*

@elishavet-pidyon

I understand your concern and have looked into it. I will see if I can find something else to use. I have a friend who is very much into security (he has his Bible app on his phone disguised as something else), and I see what his recommendation is.

With that said, I may be asking people to help create accounts on a few…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It’s beautiful to hear how you’ve found joy, Sara. I’m thankful you’ve found peace in this.

Jesus has really felt everything your family is going through. It’s not just that he understands it, he went through it – he cried and suffered and wished for the pain to disappear.

And now, in heaven, Jesus knows the best remedy to…[Read more]

Yesterday afternoon, my mom passed away. She’s with Jesus now, and I’m very joyful about that, but I miss her a lot, too.

Something really cool happened though! Saturday night, my cousins on my dad’s side came to visit my mom, and when we went home, one of them spent the night in my room just for fun, and so did my sister.

I’d been going through…[Read more]

@loopylin

sure, do whatever.

@elishavet-pidyon

I meant the whole dodgeball scene where he’s militarizing the whole thing. lol

@rae

I apologize for any mistakes, and also for taking so long.

I’m tired.

No problem at all. You mustn’t apologize, dear Miss Cranberry Sauce! I do not expect you to reply right away.

@rae

Lucille

Lucy lay curled up. She pressed her face into the jacket and the fabric on her skin eased her tight breaths. Time faded; maybe an hour passed, but it didn’t matter. Enough time passed for her senses to fade, replaced by the feeling of her mother next to her on the couch. An arm wrapped around her shoulders so she could hide in the m…[Read more]