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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
I’m glad you like it!!!! You get bits and pieces of Joseph’s backstory in LTBL, (Aaron i there for a good part of it) but you don’t get this much. So yeah, glad you liked it.
Okay, yeah. i’ll take a look at that sentence!
Yes! that’s my boy!!!!! Poor guy, he’s been through some tough stuff, as is evidenced by some of what he…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
Yes, it is! We had this huge thing where I was trying to kill off a character that everyone loved, and they were saying I was a danger to KP and needed to be thrown off! we were all joking of course, and the funniest thing was that KP crashed right at that point, so everyone joked that it was trying to get rid of me.
I totally…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
OH!!! This is the Leon from the RP!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
Yayyyy!!!! Julian!!! And more people!! 😆
It looks good! I liked the flashbacks into Joseph’s backstory. The only thing was I caught a sentence or two that didn’t flow well— “It was evening of the next day.” for example. Maybe you could change it to, “it was the next evening?” Idk. I’m sure it’s fine if you leave it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
Well I can see that what I said would have been mean if you didn’t know I was joking. It’s a long running joke with a few of us that because all authors are crazy whoever loses it fully will get kicked off. I was only playing on that thread and wasn’t thinking about the fact that you wouldn’t know about that.
I’ll work on being…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 1 day ago
@the-ducktator
I’ll be praying! 🙏
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
I was reading through our fight again, and I am really sorry. I didn’t realize how many rude and mean things I said… This happens too often for me in the family. And now I hate myself again~! I am so so so so sorry!
I don’t know if I would call it a fight as much as a misunderstanding. I struggle with the same issue at hom…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h
NEXT SECTION
Joseph curled up in his bed. He could hear the murmur of voices downstairs and knew that Noah and Darrien were holding one of their secret meetings with a few young men in the church. Sabina was in the other room, tucking in Asher and Eric. He could hear her gentle voice…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
So cute!!!! I love it so much!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 1 day ago
@anyone
So, I have a piano recital tomorrow, and the piece I’m playing is way harder than anything I’ve done before, so prayers for this would be appreciated. Also four of my siblings are in the recital too.
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RAE and Kefa are now friends 1 week, 1 day ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 1 day ago
I’m so glad he’s doing better. I’ll keep praying!
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RAE posted an update 1 week, 1 day ago
Okay, I’m a kissing potato now! Yay! And I even know what it means!!!!
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RAE replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Yes! It does!
This is the Elf, right? The blind one?
Oh dear, I forgot his name. (or rather, I forgot how to spell his name.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
You nailed the exact reasons why I like him! lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
I didn’t mean to shoot down ideas. I’m very sorry. I thought you were being funny with this whole thing. I didn’t know that it was something that really mattered to you.
Would you please forgive me?
As for saying someone needed to kick you off, that was totally because that’s what people kept saying to me when I first got on…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle Oops, I didn’t see your post.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
Thank you! I like Julian too. Though it’s really funny that he’s the character that you like. lol.
May I ask why?
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