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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 17 hours ago
A moment later, he drew it out. It was a dark crossbow bolt.
Interesting the church Leon talked about the war of Faith is the one that fell apart the most, but I guess they are in the capital where the most danger is.
Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 19 hours ago
Gotcha. You might want to try to clarify the definition a little more, but I would see what others like Linus think.
What does your signature mean, by the way?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 19 hours ago
Thanks.Yeah, they’re like right at the center of everything, so it’s not easy.
Ah, yes. It was a run-on sentence into the next paragraph, and I tried to clean it up with punctuation and forgot to change some words.
The definitions are the literal Greek translations for that word. There are two words in Greek that make up…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 19 hours ago
@keilah-h ^^
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 19 hours ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle@keilah-h @theducktator
New chapters! I’m getting a little short on my supply so I’ll probably start posting singles instead of doubles every week soon. The past few weeks have been busy, but hopefully I’ll start writing again soon.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 19 hours ago
I like how Konner and the others are afraid of the Empire. That seems realistic—I would be surprised if in a time like this, all the Christians were courageous enough to defy the government always. Julian’s speech is good. Very rousing. A few parts didn’t make sense.
“If we make decisions based on survival, and only on the abi…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 19 hours ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
The next morning after breakfast, Julian and Leon began making their way along the streets looking for the homes of the three men they had left to lead the church: Konner Krüger, Reinhold Meier, and Fox Keller.…
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 days, 19 hours ago
I have seen some stuff. It looks like it has a cool concept to it
I’ve thought about watching it just to know what the hype is about.
and from there I gathered that kitsune are fox creatures from Japanese mythology, hence why kitsune masks always have ears.
I found that out from Godly because she said one of her characters was inspired by…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 19 hours ago
I’d love to be tagged!!
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 19 hours ago
(Barnes always peaks my interest, but now more than ever, which is saying something.)
Aw, if she was aware of this conversation on a break-the-fourth-wall level, she would be mildly flattered.
Gabriel will most certainly pry into that one…
😐 Oh no, flight instinct initiated.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 20 hours ago
Oh dear, Leander, Hunter, and Gabriel may clash…
this rp may be filled with that sweet drama like in Character Party *evilly taps fingertips together*
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 days, 20 hours ago
lol
Anyone can be good at art if they practice.
Glad you like his character. He doesn’t have a written story yet, and I wasn’t planning on giving him one, but maybe I should change that decision.
Also, your forum signature is really funny.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 21 hours ago
Ooooooooooh! Interest officially peaked. (Barnes always peaks my interest, but now more than ever, which is saying something.) Gabriel will most certainly pry into that one…
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 days, 21 hours ago
Oh, and the anime style for Gabriel’s character design is from a video game called Wuthering Waves. I don’t play it, but I saw a trailer for it on YouTube a while ago, and like the style. Gabriel’s pose and much of his character design came from a character named Jiyun.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 21 hours ago
*Makes note to officially submit character for this rp after sprinting for CEW*
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 21 hours ago
@rae
Yeah it would be interesting. They definitely have different lore, though. Barnes has… maybe four different reasons for wearing her mask? Five? Oh goodness, I’ve never thought about that before but it’s true. And only one reason is remotely similar to Gabriel’s reason. -
Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 days, 21 hours ago
Do you watch Demon Slayer?
I have seen some stuff. It looks like it has a cool concept to it, but it also seems pretty dark, since the “demons” were once people. It also can get bloody, like a lot of animes.
I don’t know much about kitsune, I just googled what type of mask the demon slayer characters sometimes wear, and from there I…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 days, 21 hours ago
Boom, I knew you were inspired by anime! I know very little about Kitsune or anime besides the classic Ghibli. XD And I can’t remember where I got the mask idea myself; it was probably just a product of deciding what my character would wear. Do you watch Demon Slayer?
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 6 days, 21 hours ago
Got it, good to know. I didn’t remember what color he was before anyway, so this helps.
Got some scenes for Crosshair too? Or is he dead in the first ten minutes? LOL in that case sorry Cross
NO comment. 🤣
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 6 days, 21 hours ago
I didn’t even think about that! Cool!
The inspiration for the mask came from actually an anime called Demon Slayer. Some of the characters wear Kitsune masks, and since I first saw reference pictures and such (since I look into amines for the reference photos), I thought the masks looked neat. A few days ago, I drew a sketch of no…[Read more]
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