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@mineralizedwritings

YES!😭  I’m finishing my big novel up right now!!! Its 85k words unedited so I’m feeling pretty good about the length.

@freedomwriter76

I just read your chapter above… ERICH!! He may be another one of my favorites…

Ahh, well, you’ll come up with something😊

I did! Luckily I remembered that we have melt and pour soap and other craft supplies.

Yep, sure is! I’ve had these characters and stuff for a while (and several of the characters also appeared in Fre…

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@rae

I’ve been meaning to read this for a while and I finally got to it!! I only got to read the first chapter, but my brain is too dead to give any valuable feedback right now. Love it so far!!

I apologize in advance in the formatting is weird. I’m not sure how this is gonna look once it actually posts. XD

Chapter 1

“This was a stupid idea.” Everton Barlowe stared at the geometric building towering above him.

“I told you,” his best friend Amidala said with a smirk.

“Well, I thought it would work.”

“Ev, when would any of your ide…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Awww, Erichhh! 😭

But he sounds like such a cool POV to write from. 👀

@mineralizedwritings

I always love reading your writing. 😊 I feel like writing in present tense in becoming more popular now, at least in ya fiction, and I really enjoy it. I tried it once for a short story and failed miserably. 😂 But I might try it in a…[Read more]

@vinagirl

Ok, so I thought I made an introduction post but now I can’t remember. 😭 And if I did and you replied but I missed it somehow, forgive me. 😂 So I’m just gonna introduce myself now. 😝

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, teen girl!!

It’s so nice to have you here!

I am the old…

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@freedomwriter76

Love the scene and the backstory, but it definitely makes Erich anything but a bad guy, also that’s actually such a realistic backstory about being kicked out

I don’t know how much Jews do it, but a lot of religious will shun people if they go against their religion and even the family isn’t supposed to talk to them

Now…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ok good 😁

Y’all I actually would have totally forgotten about this if I hadn’t seen your posts. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas

Lukas ignored Fynn’s joking. What did he know? But Lukas couldn’t keep from silently laughing at himself. He was suddenly being so defensive. And he knew why… Because, well… he really did like Livia, a lot. Like… a lot.

He blushed at his own thoughts. Maybe this was just a temporary feeling. Maybe Liv didn’t fe…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I love it. If that’s what God wants you to do, then go for it! I’m sure people will still love your book nonetheless. No book and perfect, and if I’m being completely honest here… sometimes hooks are overrated…. 👀😂

@freedomwriter76

Awww they’re so cute!! poor Leon

*coughs* (now I want to draw some fanart of your characters XD)

I also want to try drawing some of my own

@loopylin

Awww I love that!!

@mineralizedwritings

We watched black panther together yesterday, and it was super good. We both really like Ross, and are mortified by the fact he will turn into red hulk in captain america: Brave New World…

So… I’ll be the one to break the wonderful news to you

there are two people with the last name of Ross, one is in black panther and is s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*sobbing*

*sobbing some more*

He’s jealous of love!! he just wants to be loved!! He needs Jesus’s love but he searching for it in all the wrong places!!

Why???!!! *cries some more*

also his not liking to talk about mothers is respectful being his past, but then he has to see Riker and his loving mother, like I’d have trouble…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thats totally ok, go with what God wants you to do! The second chapter eased you more into the action which is also a very good type of introduction😊

I kind of am still a little worried that nobody will like it the other way XD

Dont worry, I do! Think of really popular books like Harry Potter,  J.K. Rowling didn’t jump right…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’m doing good, been kind of tired and just been thinking about somethings but I’m also growing closer to the Lord and doing more Bible research

In writing I’m making some big metal progress and for the first time I really love the characters in my books and just a lot of aspects, usually I always think that other stories are…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

About prologues…I’ve never heard that before! Mine is technically a first chapter, so should I just erase the label of “prologue”?? 😂

You do whatever you want, girl, it’s your story. XD

I had actually never heard that before, but it kind of makes sense. I think some writers also use prologues for info-dumping. I’d rather have…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

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