@hannah-olsen
Active 7 years, 8 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus ooooooohhhhhh… ooh wow. Mm. Yes. I like. The only problem I have with that one is it does seem a little long. Any way around that, do you think?
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@eipcaddie2 @daughteroftheking Er, actually, I have to do something for about five minutes first
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking I’m back. And now I’m aiming to write till 9.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking And yet again I have to go. 🙁 I shall return though!
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking Okay! I’m back. I shall now be writing till 8:30.
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready actually ties in with the almost last line.
“Art ready, sir?”
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Time is a Harsh Master/Taskmaster sounds too much like a nonfiction self-help book. 😛
See, INFPs may not be natural leaders… but we wield the power of veto like a boss. *echoing evil laughter*
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@eppicaddie2 @daughteroftheking Ooops! I have to go. I’ll be back though.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus I like both Time Turns Again (*small feelz attack* IT TIES WITH THE LAST LINE YOU SEE) and The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready. The others… not so much. They just don’t fit the action feel of the story. Philosophy is all well and good (obviously, knowing me 😛 ) but the primary focus of this story, I’d say, is on the action/adventure. The…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking I’m writing till 8.
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
“The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready”
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
And an alternative would be “Time is a taskmaster”
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper I like the third one too.
I also thought I should change the second one to just: “The second time travel”
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Or this:
“Time is a harsh master”
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Or this:
“The first and second time travel”
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy Okay. How about this one?
“Time Turns Again”
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus ehh… not quite. It sounds like one of those really old, stuffy devotional books written for children in the Victorian era.
*kicks legs and scowls at her screen* I should really think of something helpful.
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Daeus replied to the topic Preview of the New KP Website in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea Cheers!
Btw, I found this plugin that might be useful. https://wordpress.org/plugins/site-is-offline-plugin/
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
After racking my brain, I managed to come up with another one.
“The battle of yesteryear”
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Daeus replied to the topic Article Question in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 7 months ago
@warrioroftherealm No, unfortunately. I’ve created three, but I haven’t started writing the stories they are in yet. Hopefully I’ll start on them a month from now.
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