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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Both look cool, but I like the second better. The first one was your profile pic before right? Maybe it goes against the design, but some color might help? You could just tint the gray parts blue or some other color.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Well…you have great points!
I think that Marcurious is an interesting one, because he’s just used to having his way and getting himself out of trouble that he doesn’t see this as any different. He sees himself as a “god” of sorts, and sees the Pythonos as just another challenge that he can overcome.
By the way, is his ability to turn…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
Pumpkin spice lattes? Or no? okay…I have never had a latte, let alone a Pumpkin Spice one. But, I do like Pumpkin Spice to begin with, so most likely yes.
Pumpkin spice lattes are THE BEST. LATTES are the best. I would totally reccomend….lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
I love that, lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Current WIP (badly in need of a title!) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years ago
I struggle with titles a lot too!
I usually just wait until the title comes to me (after all, the story’s more important than the title), and sometimes I have a temporary title until I can come up with a good one. I would say don’t rush it, because if you’re anything like me, it’s a distraction from your actual project and you’ll…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@acancello @trailblazer @grcr @rae @sarafini @mineralizedwritings
Ottoline
She never thought that she would enjoy dancing. Not in a million years. But here she was, fighting back a smile as Hugo held her in his arms. She felt like she was turning traitor on her inner being. But somehow, she didn’t care. She didn’t want this moment to end.
When…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago

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HighScribe replied to the topic Overview of my main WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Ok
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Overview of my main WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Retribution is intentionally designed to flatter, because so many of the others have a curved or jagged look. It’s one of the more solid ones in my opinion. Each of the swords is supposed to look pretty different, so that’s why only one is single edged.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Overview of my main WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
It’s cool that they all seem to all seem to have different cultural influences, but all bear the same style at the same time, like they are united in their differences.
Yeah, I kind of want each one to be based on a different sword. I did these without reference, so I’ll probably get some reference and redo them.
I think tha…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Overview of my main WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I think Conviction, Skyshard and Midnight are my favorites. Retribution looks a little boring and blocky, and I think it’s because of the square edges on the cross-guard. Also, it does seem a little odd that there’s only one single-edged sword.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Overview of my main WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @hybridlore @savannah_grace200
(This didn’t work the first time, so I have to repost)

Here’s some concept art I made for each of the swords. I didn’t color anything in, except the gemstones, because I couldn’t really figure out what color each part should be.Any thoughts? Favorite design? I like some of…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
He nodded and sat down with a thud, “Kari thinks the food is… is… poisoned,”
“I doubt it, you would have already been the first to pass out if it was.”
Lane was a bit miffed about Hugos not very nice, but true reaction. “Fine. It may not be, but still…” He trailed off thinking hard.haha!
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Ruth replied to the topic My Current WIP (badly in need of a title!) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years ago
Titles:
The Witch-queen
For Home
Ninione’s Curse
The Price of Life
Songweed’s Salvation (Note: I like the town name:))
The Fellowship of Six
What’s the lost heir about?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
Then you must be approaching one of my favorite sections of any of the books— Oathbringer’s finale is my favorite one!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Do you want to write the next RP? I wasn’t sure if you wanted to or not since Hugo and Ottoline are dancing and I did the last one?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Current WIP (badly in need of a title!) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years ago
Sounds great!
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