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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium
Lillen.
I’ve heard this question asked, and I feel I must answer it, lest the grace of the flower be shamed.
Milk-skinned are her people, with pastel eyes that can tell no lies. Sweet are her flowers, that adorn the land all the year round. Tis a tropical place, with winter rainy but ever blooming. Tis…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
Have I ever mentioned I really like your forum signature.
I thought it ended really well, I liked the mentor-y moment with Master Paul! I didn’t really understand what Cubespace was entirely, so the whole incident confused me a little.
I think Master Paul asked Nahim to fly the ship, but Nahim said no, so the Master left him there o…
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Ruth replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ooh, @power, what’s your current WIP called?
You’re making me laugh again! I agree, and I would rather keep my enemy at a spear’s distance than in my face, but Yeah, @jonas is right. Though, I have a rising feeling now to be my weird self and go against norm. Hmmm…
Second quote of the day, Normality is overrated.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Swords are overrated.
Bows and pole weapons are much better.
In real life? Yes, because range is a huge advantage. Swords were historically a sidearm.
But swords are cooler, and have more personality than other weapons.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
I thought I’d just mention that the thing about the name being an acronym is that suggests that it is actually English, and not Andromedan.
Yeah, good point. I think she’s going with a non-acronym though.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium
Who’s going next? I can’t, because my character basically has to wait until the rest of the group leaves the house. Unless he just goes on ahead and doesn’t meet up with the rest of them until they get to…wherever they’re going? That…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Igua…the story that's going nowhere in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 12 months ago
Sorry, I typed up a reply and it didn’t post, it might be tomorrow before I can reply again, Sorry.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Yes, he’s in Celestiar.
Erm, we’ll say he’s around 32, take or leave a year, but his age is highly subject to change.
But yeah, he looks older than he is, and since all the other characters seem to be children or young adults, they could mistake him for being ‘old’ lol.
I’m not sure how he’d react to this.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
And…I also didn’t mention Ellis’s eye color (although it can’t be too important.) His eyes are normally blue, except when he’s powered up by Conviction, in which case they glow green.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
He can use his planet’s magic system, but I haven’t figured it out yet, so we’ll just say it’s not working in this dimension lol.
I assume he’s in Celestiar? Conviction’s magic is working, but I guess that can be due to the fact that he is a Arcweaving construct, as opposed to a caster, so he isn’t actively using Arcweav…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
How old is Zahlin though? Given his description it sounds like he’s way older than any of the other characters, which might result in some funny interactions.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Yeah, I was imagining a forest, too.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
I was imagining a forest, probably only because that’s where the house was before. I didn’t specifically mention the surroundings in Ellis’s POV, so other people could change that if they want to. I did mention dirt though, so wherever Ellis landed has grass and soil.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Lol whenever a character is over 20 I’m like ‘oh they’re so old they practically have one foot in the grave!’ Lol 😂😂
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Ok, yeah, that was what I thought.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Oh yeah. I missed that to. Yes young adult. I have an exact age, but I can’t remember what it is. I think 20 maybe.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
How old is Ellis? Young adult?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Oh, yeah, since I posted a drawing, I forgot to say how tall Ellis is. I’m gonna say a little over six feet. Maybe 6’ 2”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Sounds good.
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