hanako

Also, did the font just change for everyone?

I have a feeling some people will be pretty mad to hear that they were forcibly dragged into a different realm to fight in a war or they never go home 😂

@jonas

So, they’re all going to meet at the house, and this Queen person will tell them what to?

Is anyone willing to welcome a character I have who I want to developed? I have one who really deserves some attention, and I’m only going to join here if invited.

@rae

Oh, I didn’t realize that the characters were going to be met at the house. Ellis has to get over there fast! Maybe he’ll be watching this from the shadows.

@highscribeofaetherium

Zahlin needs to drop in too.

I continue the motion of what @jonas said. Good advice.

@grcr

Thanks. I have weird moments where I write stuff that takes my own breath away! That’s what comes when you spend your childhood sticking your nose in flowers! And playing in streams. And with baby goats. And chasing butterflies. And hunting snakes. And digging tunnels (thankfully that never went to far!) And daydreaming. Yeah, I basically…[Read more]

Typos, please excuse.

She’s very brief I noticed. She doesn’t like to drag out speeches. I like that.

@rae

ooo this gets me excited!!!! 😆 it sounds so magically beautiful!!

@savannah_grace2009 As requested…

There was another shake of the cottage, and the door flew open, dramatic fog swirling behind a tall, but tiny figure.

She wore many layers of light blue and peacock greene, shimmering in the light, blending in the fog. Her bodice was of blue with marbled green, with the sillouttes of black butterfly’s and…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Fine by me.

@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @rae @acancello

I think that @rae should start bc she knows the most about Lillen. But that’s just me XD

@thearcaneaxiom

Tolkien does a lot of tales of the mortal man and fair elf maiden in the history of Middle Earth, so I get them mixed up, but I know that much.

If I remember correctly, that only happened three times in the history of Middle Earth, actually, although I can only remember two.

Just had to comment, lol, sorry!

@hybridlore

The problem with that is that character deaths should be meaningful. I think what we’re talking about is an out-of-universe reason for their deaths. In-universe, I see no problem with the “reason” (more like cause) for a character death being that they ran into monsters. There’s nothing less satisfying than characters just “randomly”…[Read more]

So, now I’m just putting on character cloaks, I’m bored, you can tell

@aranel

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yeah. What @jonas said 😂 be basically said EVERYTHING I was thinking haha.

@hybridlore

Thanks.

@aranel

One thing to consider is that a character’s death should mean something. I know this isn’t exactly what you were asking for, but I think it’s related. So in this scene, two MC get attacked by wendigos (nice to meet someone else who knows they’re a thing btw lol) and you feel that they have to die, or else their escape would feel like De…[Read more]

A little child’s first cry,

It’s little voice piercing the sky.

It’s as a vow and it’s as a rule,

That life should spring forth fresh and new.

A little toddler with feet so small,

Pads down the grass that is so tall.

It’s as a vow, and it’s as a rule,

That life should be given to you.

Older now, but still so young,

Fires their…[Read more]

I just feel like saying something profound right now, but…what?