hanako

@thearcaneaxiom

No problem! I did post a lot of stuff here!

The main thing is do you think there is anything particular overpowered in this magic system? I don’t think any of the individual powers are particularly OP, and nobody can have more than one, but by having people team up, there might be some OP effects that could be achieved.

@princesachronicle22

Yeah, the sleepless are interesting. That reminds me: I was surprised to see a sleepless in Edgedancer. That was one of the few things that surprised me.

I liked how he continued the trend of Lopen accidentally swearing his oaths after the action is over XD.

@princesachronicle22

I had mostly similar thoughts about Dawnshard. It was more enjoyable, than Edgedancer, for me, because the events weren’t things that I had already figured out based on later books. As I said before, I didn’t avoid spoilers for this book, so there was nothing shocking. The information about dawnshards is what interests me mos…[Read more]

@esther-c

That sounds really interesting!! 😄 (sorry, I don’t have much else to say lol)

@hybridlore

Aww it’s cute! I actually like it! For some reason it reminds me of “A Series of Unfortunate Events” books. Idk why XD

@highscribeofaetherium

I was laughing so hard!!! The plunger gun…ahhh that was great! hahaha!

Mr Mwahaha…that’s hilarious!!

@loopylin

It’s okay. Chase has black hair, pale skin. His irises are usually black, but change color. Green means he has earned your trust. He’s wearing currently a white T-shirt and jeans. Oh, and his arms and hands are noticeably scarred.

One note, if Sef is with Chase, he’d step in front of her and act very different, but I guess Sef isn’t…[Read more]

Here is something cringe-worthy:

I wrote this when I was… 12? I think? Oh well. I had a fascination with creating weird names, and I never planned a plot, so everything is crazy and all over the place…

This scene doesn’t make much sense, so sorry…

“Your the reason I have bad luck!” Yelled Jesti at the little brown cat laying on his bed.…

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@jonas

Weird.

@highscribeofaetherium

You were writing in first person the whole time, because you consistently used the word ‘we’, but you refer to yourself in the third person, which implies that this being narrated from someone else’s perspective.

@grcr @hanako

That’s funny. I don’t know if I’ve actually ever met an Osborne (or an Osborn) I wasn’t related to before.

Why did I make my little brother the hero of the story!?!? 🤣

I feel the need to preface this by saying no, seven-year-old me was not insane, nor a psychopath.

Pontoon Boat Catastrophe

It was a dark night. The waves crashed against the shores of Door County. We were in a pontoon boat on the enormous waves.

“We must pass the dangerous Horseshoe Island!”

exclaimed Captain Grandpa.

“Tidal wave!” yelled…

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@highscribeofaetherium

Hey!! We have the same last name!! lol

BWAHAHAHAH lookie what I’ve found… hehehe…

Prepare to have your minds BLOWN.

*has been stalking*

Oof… what a topic…

Pretty much everything I wrote when I was 12-13 is trashy…

@highscribeofaetherium

*is so confused*

Um…..that is the UNDERSTATEMENT of the century lol I was questioning 13 year old Sara’s sanity when I read this….

I’m glad you changed directions with your novel lol.

Ummmmmmmmmmmmm YESSS. I actually thought this junk could get published!!!

THIS IS WHY YOU NEED PLOTTING! OR ELSE YOUR WRITING WILL END U…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yeah….but the problem is that i’ll have to have implants when I turn eighteen because those teeth will never grow back…so there will be holes in my mouth for eternity. Fun times!