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Ruth replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Cole…he’s in 19th Century Roleplay. This was my intro post for him:
Alright…I’m gonna call my Cole from the ashes of my life where he lies, brush him off, and shine his medals.
Cole was my hero as a young child, he did every brave deed I could think up, in a WWII setting. I don’t remember him much, since when I hit the mark of ten or so…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Hi! Nice to meet you, Trilliane! I’m Bridget, aka HighScribe, aka the resident slightly insane sword-obsessed book hoarder of KP. I’m a homeschooler, and a high school freshman. I mostly write fantasy, and I’m working on a fantasy universe with multiple planets with my brother, @Jonas.
Now the traditional quest…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Greetings from Burne!
I’m -GRCR-! I’m a fiction fantasy-ish writer, an avid artist, a journalist for my fictional newspaper, and a character lover/creator that has over three hundred (oh, and I love them so much that I wish they were real people, lol). I enjoy listening to music and imagining my characters singing the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Also, who’s Cole and what RP is he in?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, like I said to Sara, I do get that, but Nedan is so so SO underdeveloped. I would be RPing with little more than a name, a job, and a power. Sure he might develop, but he could become basically anything, and he needs to become a character that’s right for this story. So maybe I will do it some time, (I have considered adding him to sch…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
Ooo!! Cool idea!
I don’t have any plot ideas and such right now, but I’ll let you know if I think of any!
Aannddd… even though I write mostly male characters, I don’t really have any advice. 😅 I agree with what Esther said, though.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Wow. You (and your sister) are amazing at building worlds!
Thanks! As a disclaimer, this is by far my most unique world.
Yeah, characters definitely drive the plot forward, which is why it’s such a problem that most of them are underdeveloped. Those are good points about internal conflict too.
Anyway, you also said you d…
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Ruth replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Anyway, you also said you don’t put Nedan in RP’s because he’s underdeveloped. I actually think the purpose of role plays is actually to develop your character. I have put many characters that aren’t developed in role plays and it helps me to hear their voice and learn more about them, just from writing them outside…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Livia
“I had people I hung out with, but they weren’t really my friends. I could never really be close with them, because we had to hide our secret from the government,” her eyes wandered for a moment to Lukas and Callie dancing across the room. She tore her eyes from Lukas and back to Fynn. “So I know how you feel.”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh wow!!! This is a really cool idea!!
I’m not really sure how you want your story to go…but I would really recommend developing your characters before any plotting! Figure out their character arcs and internal conflicts. (Abbie Emmons on YouTube really helped me learn why internal conflicts matter! But if you do watch her…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Wow. You (and your sister) are amazing at building worlds! I feel like mine is so cliche! I really can’t help you much on worldbuilding, because I’m really new to that and it would be like trying to teach a professional artist how to draw, XD
But I will gladly try to help you with characters!!!
@grcr gave some great pointers on character…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
I like it!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@grcr @highscribeofaetheruim @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @anyone
I drafted the song again, not sure if i really like it yet, but it’s a step closer than yesterday.
Life is a waking nightmare,
Day after day, I roll along without you
Night is a dagger of pain because you are there
Haunting my dreams like some old ghost,
Calling my…
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Oop, guess I didn’t see that.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I did list white. Iridescence is a good idea. I’ve been thinking of having the white one be like that.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I’ll comment more later, but for crystal color, maybe one could be a whitish/clear or maybe silvery colored? Or sort of iridescent?
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Thanks, that’s all helpful! A dark red, like burgundy, might be good actually. And I could also try a reddish violet color, because the two purple colors I’m using so far are both more cool purples. (I don’t really like warm purples, so that’s why, but I can’t afford to be picky!)
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I personally love long rps you’re fine.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Ooo… this sounds really interesting. I’m excited to hear more!
For the colors… maybe use a third shade of purple, or grass/parakeet/pear green (I don’t really know what it is exactly, so here’s the hex:Â #87e36b)? I know those are a bit similar to the ones you already have… but that’s all I can think of at the moment. Were you…[Read more]
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