Jean Coul

@linus-smallprint the chapter, what glitch?

@ellette-giselle yeah I get you on not liking the “Children disobey parents, keep secrets, do things the parents say no to, and in the end it all worked out because they were right and the parents were wrong, and there’s NO consequences for all of it” thing. Like, it’s not like parents aren’t wrong s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle yeah it’s been a while since I watched the show, but I remember that scene/episode quite clearly. It was really well done.

@ellette-giselle @thearcaneaxiom ooh I remember that scene, that was a really good show.

also great moodboards!

And the “feeling like he’s a failure, stemming from pride” actually makes a weird amount of sense.

@ellette-giselle ooh wow! Super sad, but still a great job showing the harsh reality of death in war, especially on the losing side.

@linus-smallprint wow! That was interesting!

@rae haha yep

looks like Sniper got back at Silvanis for calling him “weird hat guy” or whatever it was he called him.

@theshadow @theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22

Sniper

“…To get past my strong immunity, another thing from my father, it’d have to be some sleeping potion. Though, it could just be they used different m…[Read more]

@everybody

oooh I might go back to this forum sometimes!

Personally, I’m weird:

my best friends are my brother, my cousins, and a few fellow writers (at least one of which knows three ways to kill somebody with a fork), and the only male out of all those for the longest time was my bro before a guy joined my in-person teen writer group…[Read more]

@theshadow you’re good! I was just about to ask if we could get back to this lol

@kyronthearcanin @rae @theducktator @princesachronicle22

Sniper

“The only question is why, though, and how.” Trevor replied.

I thought back to my previous experience bein’ transported to a mysterious world, but I found I could remember nothin’ but huntin’ oth…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint yeah I guess I’ll just have to find out lol

It’ll be interesting either way.

@linus-smallprint yeah yours was really cool!

Clone Wars style is kinda how I always draw, because I sort of learned to draw people by making a ton of Clone Wars/Bad Batch fan art.

@freed_and_redeemed THAT’S AMAZING!!!

@theshadow oh man you’re actually reading it

glad you like it so far though

I’ll make sure to update it later, I don’t write directly on the google doc, I have it in Word and then copy it over

@grcr @linus-smallprint @rae @ellette-giselle ok! I still don’t have my own drawing of the character, but my brother and I will judge each of your drawings on how close they were to our imagining of Feather!

They were all really good and really close to my thoughts. You all got the scar in the right place, too!

• I like the way you did the…

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@elishavet-pidyon ok, that’s fine!

@linus-smallprint I don’t know. It’s just that you only talk about Alan and Tyn having a redemptive journey (although I suppose that’s only because they’re the main characters), and Alan literally just arrested a Christian couple for existing, so I thought if Alan becomes a Christian somewhere down the line, how accepting will Oliver be of that,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle ooooh it’s getting intense!!

@rae Yeah, personally I think it should switch between the two characters, unless the whole book is solidly from one character’s POV, in which case stick with him.

@rae ok cool!

@everyone else I’ll review your drawings tomorrow! I have to get my brother on this because I share the character with him.

@theducktator @grcr lolllll

too funny