Jean Coul

also this is gonna sound super morbid but if there’s gonna be death, then I wouldn’t mind seeing someone fall to Mundy’s tail stab. Probably said that already but whatever.

actually, Crosshair doesn’t have venom in his tail but the end is really thin and has spikes, and he can crack it like a whip, so that’d be cool to see too.

I’m gonna go draw some fan art for this, be right back lol

@whalekeeper wowwwwww that was amazing! My charries were spot on. Poor Mundy all tied up though lol

honestly it makes me really sad that only one character is getting out alive from this. I know the chance of one of my guys being The One is effectively zero, so I’m not so sad for them. They can handle it—they were kinda made for this, and I m…[Read more]

@rae ahh makes sense. I mean, I don’t think I have a noticeable accent but I chop off the g’s and whatnot when talking sometimes, so I think I’d type my own speech pattern like that too.

ooh interesting! I like that idea, it’s unique. I think it’d be a cool idea that if you’re planning to publish this book/series, to include a guidebook with…[Read more]

@rae I’m ok with that! As long as you stay within the KP guidelines (like, no excessive gore or anything lol) I’m sure it’ll be fine.

@ellette-giselle Considering that you are 18 and fine with early marriage, I trust you when you write about that stuff. I now know you’re not just a 14-year-old thinking that 17-year-olds are super mature compared to you.

You don’t need to change the story in any way. It’s your story, and like I said, my mom was married at 17 and her…[Read more]

@rae ahhh ok sounds really cool.

maybe they just like wearing those hats. I mean, look at him, who doesn’t think that looks cool? I’ve wanted a hat like that since before I ever discovered where it came from.

Also, that style of “hat with brim all the way around” is kinda standard issue if you’re in a hot climate (I mean, think fishing hats…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle oooh yeah I’ve always liked that culture’s style too.

cause like American fiction defaults to sticking a slouch hat on a character when they want to make him obviously Australian, or at least a guy from a desert-y kinda place.

@rae ooh yeah definitely. Hat and all.

What was his nationality?

I don’t think I’m gonna be a part of it because I already put in my two cents.

@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle I feel like this story forum isn’t the best place for that though.

I think one of you should tag the others in a status update and go at it there. Discussing it here is just gonna ruin the experience of anyone who’s just trying to read the story and has to sift through 3 pages of arguing about a…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings haha I will!

Sometime……

@mineralizedwritings that ship art is too cute

I should get to doing that more

@rae idk who he reminds you of lol

@theshadow thanks, I had a ton of fun drawing him.

@theshadow lol yeah I’ll get to it soon hopefully

Again, it’s your story, you can do whatever you want, I’m not going to stop reading it just because of a character’s age.

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle WHOA WHOA WHOA I DID NOT MEAN TO START A FIGHT.

I’m more inclined to agree with Whaley and Sara’s point of view out of personal experience, but it’s Ellette’s story, and she can do whatever she wants. It’s just as someone who’s closer to 18 than 17, it was weird to me that Sabina’s considering…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings yeah Wingfeather isn’t too cohesive, but in the author’s defense I’m pretty sure it was the first series he ever wrote, and I don’t know how many drafts the story went through.

I do love some of the worldbuilding though.

@linus-smallprint Wow! That was good!

Alan, listen to your father, he’s making some very valid points.

@ellette-giselle god of war????

lol I didn’t expect that to be the one video game soundtrack you liked

absolutely no judgement though, I’ve listened to a few of the tracks and they’re great

@whalekeeper I KNOW. what the heck is wrong with me. HE’S A FLIPPING DECADE OLDER. and I’ve never been a simp before. NEVER. TILL LAST MARCH. WHY. WHYYYYYYYYY.

I am actually very concerned for myself.

I’m glad you like his voice though. The actor who did him totally killed it.