Jean Coul

@freed_and_redeemed THAT’S AMAZING!!!

@theshadow oh man you’re actually reading it

glad you like it so far though

I’ll make sure to update it later, I don’t write directly on the google doc, I have it in Word and then copy it over

@grcr @linus-smallprint @rae @ellette-giselle ok! I still don’t have my own drawing of the character, but my brother and I will judge each of your drawings on how close they were to our imagining of Feather!

They were all really good and really close to my thoughts. You all got the scar in the right place, too!

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@elishavet-pidyon ok, that’s fine!

@linus-smallprint I don’t know. It’s just that you only talk about Alan and Tyn having a redemptive journey (although I suppose that’s only because they’re the main characters), and Alan literally just arrested a Christian couple for existing, so I thought if Alan becomes a Christian somewhere down the line, how accepting will Oliver be of that,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle ooooh it’s getting intense!!

@rae Yeah, personally I think it should switch between the two characters, unless the whole book is solidly from one character’s POV, in which case stick with him.

@rae ok cool!

@everyone else I’ll review your drawings tomorrow! I have to get my brother on this because I share the character with him.

@theducktator @grcr lolllll

too funny

@stephie yeah the formatting fixed itself a little while after I posted

@loopylin cute!! I have a stuffed apatosaurus too. His name is Twix.

@freed_and_redeemed @smiley @theshadow

Oh yeah I forgot to put the thing introducing the species in the beginning. Ugh. That’s in the same chat as the drawings

I also have art of most of the characters, they’re in the latest two or three pages of the non-human sentients chat

@smiley @freed_and_redeemed you’re not gonna know the fandom this is for but just know that it’s based off a video game series I don’t really suggest getting into but I enjoyed., and I like turned it into a sci-fi thing so now all the characters are different creatures and there’s space travel and stuff.

@theshadow you’ll probably like this…[Read more]

also, is the formatting weird for anyone else?

@ellette-giselle@mineralizedwritings yep I’m a non-dating teenager too. My parents don’t care for it,

As for dresses, I kinda hate ’em but that doesn’t mean I’m not concerned about being modest. No way. I wouldn’t wear none of that revealing nonsense a lotta kids these days wear if you gave me a thousand bucks.

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@theshadow thanks! I didn’t mean for you to sift through my ideas lol, I meant I was going to and see if I had anything cool for you XD. reading over it I realized I made a typo which made it seem like I was saying that. heh heh.

anyway.

@linus-smallprint ooh Charles is Alan’s father? Interesting!

Also that’s horrible what they did to Oliver and his brother. (I’m really hoping he doesn’t like betray them or anything. He’s one of my favorite characters so far. Partially because he’s a lizard and I love lizards, and partially because I greatly enjoy his accent lol)

@rae so kinda both? Like a form of self-insert?

I’ve done kinda the same thing before too. It’s why I always wrote Huntress’s POV in the roleplays from first person–she’s partially built off a heavily distorted me, and thus I find it much easier to write her from the inside rather than from externally.

@ellette-giselle lol my parents want to know what it’s like to live in Europe for a month or two.

Only time will tell if we will ever actually do that.though.