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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 58 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle not a ramble! At least you’re rambling about your writing and not about something random…..as I do quite commonly…..
eheheheheh you remember THOSE conversations which I’m NOT gonna bring up on this forum after this lolllllAnd I think 13 is fine tbh. Your books are actually not that bad in terms of violence so far.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 12 hours, 17 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle aww cute, although I have NO idea who Kenna and Zeke are lolll
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 hours, 17 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle 17, almost 18. Remember how I was making a big deal about Sabina getting married that young because I could barely imagine getting married at my age? lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 hours, 40 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle If you can’t find any way to trim it down, I’d rather you keep the whole thing than delete it entirely.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 hours, 57 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle whoa I love that map!!
also, I agree with @hybridlore about how the section’s a little long. I realize that the answers to Joseph’s questions have to be properly explained–after all, I would say corrupting God’s message is far worse then never including it in the first place–but I, like her (hybridlore you are a girl right??…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 day, 13 hours ago
@ellette-giselle thank you!!! I had to do his eye like three times before I got it right. Same with the guy’s hand.
@rae certainly! I’m not sure when I’ll find the motivation for it lol, but I’m definitely gonna write something for it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 13 hours ago
@ellette-giselle oof poor guy.
That’s an age where it’s gotten much harder to just kinda brush it off, but at the same time you still don’t have the capability of fully understanding it yet.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 days, 10 hours ago
@rae thank you!!
they were fun to draw. I might make this into a crossover fanfic.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 days, 12 hours ago
I don’t know how many of you on here are How To Train Your Dragon fans, but I know you’re out there lol, so here’s Toothless with Dell/Engineer from my current WIP (and in turn taken from a video game series):
I haven’t colored them yet, but I’m planning to.
this is how you know I’m really into something, when I combine it with…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 13 hours ago
@ellette-giselle wow that was so sad!!
How old is this poor kid anyway???
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 12 hours ago
@theshadow yeah, they do lol
I think I figured it out some though.
Sniper, like the rest of his team, fears nearly nothing, except magic of any kind. (Listening to some of his voicelines on Halloween-exclusive game modes, he seems utterly terrified at the concept of being attacked by a wizard or ghost.)
Obviously Silvanis and Fairy’s powers…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 13 hours ago
@ellette-giselle ok! I didn’t say remove the scene, it’s good.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 13 hours ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 13 hours ago
@loopylin That’s good. So he’s a pretty chill guy, he’s just messing around.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 days, 13 hours ago
@grcr 🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 days, 13 hours ago
@theducktator No!
…..ok, fine, yes.
 I’ve already mentioned it on two forums so maybe we’ll leave this where it is……my parents will tease me to the end of the earth if they find out about the whole ordeal and I REALLY don’t want that. -
Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 13 hours ago
@linus-smallprint ok, yeah that sounds about right!
I didn’t think of that, but you’re probably right. I kind of like whimsical, just as long as it doesn’t get cheesy.
Yeah me too!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 13 hours ago
@ellette-giselle I like it!!
I do think it was kinda hard to figure out who the POV character is. Maybe make that a little more clear.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 13 hours ago
@whalekeeper no offense to HP fans or any series really. Just had to use something that I’ve seen split families and friendships, and I think that’s horrible.
Personally, I take the stance of “You can like whatever the Saxton Hale you like, as long as it’s not controlling you and it’s not encouraging you to try any stuff (magic, murder, substance…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 13 hours ago
@theducktator Well, other than that.
I think that falls less in the realm of “deadly sin” and more “proving yourself as an annoying miscreant.”
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