@grcr
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Whaley started the topic God in Our Stories in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 1 month ago
Helloooooo.
How do you approach God in your stories?
This is one of those always-present Christian writers topic that never gets resolved because there is never just one answer XD I’m sure there have been many other topics about this. But here’s another, to once again discuss.
I don’t think not having God in your story is a bad thing. In f…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Hi from Sara! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
KP must’ve eaten it. I’ll post it again.
@savannah_grace2006
Heyy! Nice to meet you! I’m HighScribe, a teenage homeschool Christian writer! I mostly write fantasy, but I might to sci-fi someday.
Questions:
What are your top favorite books?
Is a hotdog a sandwich?
Who’s your favorite character from fiction?
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
Mmmmm… Willow and Kydon are the only Tarnas mentioned in the first chapter. So, Savyn and Lucius Tarna are their parents, but that isn’t mentioned until this last chapter. I hope that makes sense!
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Whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
😂❤️ Your tiger could meet our characters at the stream!
Okay cool.
Yeah 😂 He knows he can’t figure out Nyx’ age, but just from the way he acts, Gus will assume he is inexperienced, and therefore uses that nickname. Honestly he calls any recruit of any age a babe, if they act immature 😂 So there’s the expla…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@grcr just continue–it’ll stay dead if we wait lol
I’m not going to be on after this until tomorrow, but I will keep going. I haven’t had the chance to use Skyraptor much lately.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @grcr @lydibug @godlyfantasy12
I’m finally going to join in with her!
Skyraptor
She awoke on the sand. Ugh. It itched on her feathers.
Where was…..
Her master’s thoughts were obscured! She could barely hear his thoughts, and what she could hear was so muffled and echo-y she couldn’t tell what he was…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@grcr Yeah, it is!
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Allison replied to the topic Clearest Rivers | A poem I wrote in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 2 months ago
Great! Thank you!
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Allison replied to the topic Clearest Rivers | A poem I wrote in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 2 months ago
I really like your poem! So the way I see it is basically the last two lines you wrote,
“Even if our country goes insane,
The clearest rivers will still remain.”
So kind of like even if our country goes insane, the clearest rivers (people?) still remain?
If I totally did not understand it, dont worry I do not know if I am the best at…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Clearest Rivers | A poem I wrote in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 2 months ago
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
Next chapter!
Arriving at the twin’s home, Kydon shook himself from his reverie. But just before he crested the hill, he stopped. He heard a sound that he had not heard since before O’Fell was a ruin—the jingle of a horse’s reins and the creak of a wagon. Kydon dropped to all fours and crawled to peek over the top of the hill.
A large w…[Read more]
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
Ok! I will work on that!
Conrad and Caleb have a last name… but unfortunately, it can not be disclosed at this time in the story…
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
The next chapter ^
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KydonAndWillow replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
So… His giving the muffins to the twins is a flashback of sorts. I really need to fix it so it isn’t so confusing as to when the flashbacks start and end. Thanks for the input! I’ll try to add the next chapter soon.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@grcr um……probably both.
I use dragons a lot more in my stories, but I have a lot of dinosaur characters and use them sometimes to make dragons.
Plus, if you think about it, dinos and dragons are kinda the same thing. Before the word “dinosaur” was created, scientists actually called the fossils they found “dragons” and used the two words i…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@grcr Well, I’ve never watched it except in bits and pieces, but I’ve read all the books and such based on it and know about the lore, and I think Blue is awesome (most of the characters are but she’s special for some reason lol)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@grcr you’re welcome!
oh and thanks, she’s a favorite character of mine too!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @grcr @lydibug @godlyfantasy12
I finally have a character!
Her name is Sky, but she insists on everyone calling her Skyraptor, so that’s what she’ll be called here.
She’s a small green Velociraptor with deep blue stripes, one on each side of her body (think Blue from Jurassic World but green, not gray, and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@grcr I love your signature thing down on the bottom! I remember that movie! (my parents showed it to me a little while ago)
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Lydibug replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Thanks! 😊
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