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@esther-c

(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Okay….

I have come to a decision lol

I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.

Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

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The next morning, the adults were up bright and early, surprisingly before the children. “Amelia, why don’t you join us girls in the kitchen,” Sabina said when Amelia and Joseph appeared. “We can work on the big breakfast for the children.”

“Oh…

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I finished my 350 words. They’re on paper, but here’s a snippet:

Being chained to a wall and forced to learn history was possibly the most miserable start to a morning ever. Burnt toast did not help either. Jorin sighed. Malzor was a terrible cook, or maybe he just didn’t care whether Jorin was well fed or not. He could almost taste his fathers’s…

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@stephie

Forgot to return here.

The last chapter I wrote was 2,546 words long, so I think I got through all those snowballs.

Now I have 20. What to do with them?

Throws 4 at each of the following:
@theducktator
@grcr
@highscribeofaetherium
@savannah_grace2009
@theshadow

@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle

Thank y’all so much!💜

@ellette @elishavet @koshka @keilah-h @rae @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol

Again, extra words from the song “Here Again” by Elevation Worship.

Leon Aesthetic for the 3rd book! 🥹

Y’all know I love Riker…but y’all, when I say Leon has also stolen my heart (and broken it,…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @hybridlore

I have FINALLY caught up with all my snowballs!!!!!!!!!!

and I wrote a Lotr paper while doing it. I thought I would post it here and see what you all think. (My father gave me this assignment in preparation for a Lotr New Year’s night out my siblings and I are having with two friends.

Why do you enjoy the…

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@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

STEPHEN

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

DAVID

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

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“How can we be praying for each other?” Joseph asked as the small group sat about the living room, open Bibles on their laps.

“Rose is ill,” William said.

Joseph glanced at the empty chair beside the young man and gave him an encouraging smile.…

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@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

here you go!!

I can’t wait to hear feedback on who he is and what sort of character he’ll turn out to be!!!

@freed_and_redeemed

No judgement. I respect your decision and your standpoint (same to you @grcr). Thanks for the resources. I have some reasons why I don’t agree entirely though, but I don’t want to come off as rude or accidentally get into an argument lol. I’ll just say that I don’t think the Church chose the 25th solely for competition with pa…[Read more]

@grcr

Well… I’ve read books with 100+ chapters, so it wouldn’t bother me at all. The book I’m reading right now is YA fantasy with roughly 70 chapters. If your chapters are a little short, it might make sense to combine some of them so it doesn’t feel too choppy. But otherwise it’s all up to you.

@grcr you have no idea how relieved I am to hear that someone believes the same😂 I only know 1 family irl that don’t celebrate Christmas, and it often feels like my family is alone in what we believe about Christmas, and tbh it can get low-key lonely at times

We just personally believe that God deserves better than recycled material, that He…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

Anyone want to see the Aesthetic of a character we haven’t met yet? Ya’ll are free to guess who it might be, but I’m not promising answers.

@highscribeofaetherium @grcr

*screams in agony* Now I have 350 words to write. I’d better get to work!

Welp… I wrote a short story! XD

If you have the time, I’d love to hear your thoughts on it before I show it to friends and family. (It’s kinda long, I apologize, lol. It’s under 11k.)

Tagging some folks just in case you’re interested, but don’t feel obligated to read it. :))

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

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The days passed and Joseph worked hard to build furniture for their home. He found woodworking trying at times, but David and Stephen helped him.

Amelia began to bring over blankets and dishes she had saved, and men and women of the church gave…

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@grcr

I’m praying.🩷

@esther-c

Someone’s always sick this time of year.😖Praying.

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Nahim scene (which will probably end up in my book)

275 words

“Life for me has been…dark since they died.” Nahim turned his face away.

Master Canin wrapped his arm around Nahim’s shoulders like a father, pulling him close. “I know, Nahim. The war has taken away my daughter. It’s been years since I’ve seen her.”

N…

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