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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@whalekeeper
I love how Lucy is wondering why there’s a piano in the room, while I’m over here like “It couldn’t be empty, and just a couch or chair is boring, so piano was the first thing I thought of”. Zero deep meaning just a brain who was trying to rp while listening to a streamer talk about a mech video game. -
Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
“A piano? This is a piano?”
Gabriel touched it gently, dust flying into the air. He jumped back defensively as an off-tune note rang in the air from the key he pressed.
“Is that normal?” He watched the piano like a curious kitten, not sure if they should attack, ignore, or play with it.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel nodded. “Good.” He stood, the voices that still had been whispering in his head that day were quiet as he had bound up her arms, but now they returned, a constant noise slowly driving him insane.
Gabriel waved one of his glowing blades ahead. The walls were rough like brick, the floor with l…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
LOL, take a look
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Ruth changed their profile picture 9 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
Gabriel Mai — The Protector
Gabriel untucked his shirt, cutting along the hem in a long strip, then cut another one. He pulled the vial disinfectant from his pocket. “Hold still.” He took her arm, trying to be gentle, but he knew it would sting. He silently cursed himself for leaving salve in his cottage and not slipping it into h…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 9 months ago
*gasp* THE FIRST ONE!!! 😱
and yes, the second one is something that sometimes happens for me. Hard to keep track of what sets some characters off when others are fine…. 🙃
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel nodded, backing closer to the door, before spinning around, tumbling inside with Lucy and shutting the hatch, darkness enveloping them as the crow’s talons scraped against the rough metal, their screeches of frustration cutting through the fog outside.
Inside, the air was stale but strangely w…[Read more]
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Ruth's profile was updated 9 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 9 months ago

Ryla became the first MC for my current WIP because I was fiddling around with some tiny ducks and arranged them into a scene in which they were in a circle surrounding one laying on a flat rock, and another wearing an eraser cap on his head about to kill her with a tack. I immediately wanted to know what was going through the mind of the poor…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
Yes, I do every year, except this year because my Mom made canned cranberry sauce…hence why I didn’t eat it because it wasn’t the recipe I like.
I don’t eat it on anything, just straight cranberry sauce.
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Ruth replied to the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 9 months ago
In Guardian Angels
my beloved flopNahim, in his earliest form, was a broken soldier finding healing. At first he was just another character, but eventually, as I got older and hit troubles in my life, I began to morph him into something that resembled some of my thoughts and feelings. He became almost a way of self-expression over the years, b…[Read more] -
FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
I haven’t been watching it, but I think after the book they managed to revive him. He’s my favorite character and I don’t want him permanently dead. 🙁
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
All hail the best Thanksgiving food! I assume your family makes the sauce?
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Awesome! I’ll put Celarent and Ryla in tomorrow. Should I just pick teams for them?
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
To: Mellissa Thompson, my secret hideout, the In Between place
From: Angelita, 4647 Flambert Lane, Dingyville, Maryland, The United States
Dear Mel,
That pool sounds scary. What is an inbetween place? How do you get to one? Were there frogs at that weird indoor pool? Frogs are way less gross than boys. FROGS don’t leave their u…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.
Thanks.
But stubborn me still hates it (it’s a me problem, I am genuinely thankful)
Also, I really, reall…[Read more]
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