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@ellette-giselle

Okay, then yes, that’s makes sense.

LOL. Okay, I’m sorry for interrupting your story. I’ll just sit here quietly and wait for the next segment. 😂

@hybridlore

I mean like having a page in there that says, “Part 2” Like in the unabridged Little Women.

Maybe someone else from the church could go with him? Maybe because Joseph is so young, Darrien and Noah decide he needs a partner?

Someone’s jumping the gun.

How about you just hold your horses and wait and see. lololololol.

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@ellette-giselle

What do you mean by splitting the sections into two parts?
I think it’s fine as long as you don’t end the last scene abruptly and put like a marker, like “six years later…”

I don’t know, just with Joseph feeling called to go off alone to a different city where basically no one is a Christian… I understand it is a missionary st…[Read more]

@grcr

Well, it’s a lot to listen to. You;’ll have to tell me what you think after you’ve heard all the ones you haven’t listened to before.

@grcr

No Noah?

Well That’s almost all of them. Right?

@grcr

How many did you find on YouTube? I know they planned to upload all of them.

@hybridlore

Yes, it is a time jump!!!! If it’s too jolting, I may split the sections into parts. I’ll see what Linus says.

Uh, no, he’s not. Aaron was a missionary. Joseph is looking to become an elder. It’s two different things. He wants to be Aaron, but he can’t. That’s not what he’s been called to do.

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@grcr

Yeah! I’ve found them all between the Sight and Sound YouTube channel and Pandora (Spotifi has them too) I can send some album links if you want.

haha, I bet they are.

Okay then! I’ll make sure to tag you, though you’ll want to read the chapters I’ve posted or else this’ll make no sense. lol.

@ellette-giselle

WOAH. Time jump. But I love the new side plot. Although, Joseph is basically becoming Aaron now, like Linus has mentioned. I wonder how you could change his circumstances to make it feel completely different from Aaron. But anyway, great job! 👏 I’ll listen to the song later and let you know what I think.

@grcr

Have you listened to the soundtracks? They have them online and I’vfe listened to all of them. Daniel is going to be AMAZING!!

Haha! So all you’re doing is reading the critiques? lol. That’s funny! I hope they’re interesting. haha,

Do you want me to tag you when I post chapters?

@grcr

SO COOL!!! My friend got to see it live too! I watched it online when they streamed for free one night. I LOVE Sight &Sound, and I’m DYING to see Daniel!!!!!! I loved David so much! I feel like Esther onward took a huge turn in their music style and quality.

Ooo! What do you think from what you’ve read?

@grcr

I KNOW!!!! It is such a good song!!

Hey, have you been stalking this forum? (curiosity.)

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon

If this book had a theme song, this would have to be it. I have listened to it several times while editing, and this just about embodies the whole story.

What do y’all think?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon

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The wind blew gently on the roof of the little house in the middle of the great capital city of Ardenta. On the roof, his legs crossed and a Bible on his knees, was a young man. He was reading intently, and every now and then he leant over to write dow…

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And…I spelled your name wrong. Sorry

@keilah-h ^^^

@kielah-h

The utter absurdity of this phrase though.

Lol

My Aussie may actually see this…

He’ll find it amusing though

That makes sense! Cool! Though if Soldier represents Americans…actually, the writers may have had a point…

Oh and the honey thing? Ornithiforms LOVE honey. He has this habit of getting it all over himself on…

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@keilah-h

Kathleen’s account still exists, so he should be allowed on. I know @raxforge had some difficulty getting on, and I ended up sending a message through the contact us page about my application.

@theducktator I’m sorry, I tagged you wrong. How did your recital go?

@theshadow

Praying 🙏 🙏 God is with you and your family, even when it’s hard to see Him or trust. I love these verses from Psalm 16  —

“I will bless the Lord who guides me; even at night my heart instructs me. I know the Lord is always with me. I will not be shaken, for he is right beside me. No wonder my heart is glad, and I rejoice. My body r…[Read more]