-GRCR-

@ellette-giselle

WOAH. Time jump. But I love the new side plot. Although, Joseph is basically becoming Aaron now, like Linus has mentioned. I wonder how you could change his circumstances to make it feel completely different from Aaron. But anyway, great job! 👏 I’ll listen to the song later and let you know what I think.

@grcr

Have you listened to the soundtracks? They have them online and I’vfe listened to all of them. Daniel is going to be AMAZING!!

Haha! So all you’re doing is reading the critiques? lol. That’s funny! I hope they’re interesting. haha,

Do you want me to tag you when I post chapters?

@grcr

SO COOL!!! My friend got to see it live too! I watched it online when they streamed for free one night. I LOVE Sight &Sound, and I’m DYING to see Daniel!!!!!! I loved David so much! I feel like Esther onward took a huge turn in their music style and quality.

Ooo! What do you think from what you’ve read?

@grcr

I KNOW!!!! It is such a good song!!

Hey, have you been stalking this forum? (curiosity.)

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon

If this book had a theme song, this would have to be it. I have listened to it several times while editing, and this just about embodies the whole story.

What do y’all think?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon

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The wind blew gently on the roof of the little house in the middle of the great capital city of Ardenta. On the roof, his legs crossed and a Bible on his knees, was a young man. He was reading intently, and every now and then he leant over to write dow…

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And…I spelled your name wrong. Sorry

@keilah-h ^^^

@kielah-h

The utter absurdity of this phrase though.

Lol

My Aussie may actually see this…

He’ll find it amusing though

That makes sense! Cool! Though if Soldier represents Americans…actually, the writers may have had a point…

Oh and the honey thing? Ornithiforms LOVE honey. He has this habit of getting it all over himself on…

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@keilah-h

Kathleen’s account still exists, so he should be allowed on. I know @raxforge had some difficulty getting on, and I ended up sending a message through the contact us page about my application.

@theducktator I’m sorry, I tagged you wrong. How did your recital go?

@theshadow

Praying 🙏 🙏 God is with you and your family, even when it’s hard to see Him or trust. I love these verses from Psalm 16  —

“I will bless the Lord who guides me; even at night my heart instructs me. I know the Lord is always with me. I will not be shaken, for he is right beside me. No wonder my heart is glad, and I rejoice. My body r…[Read more]

@esther-c

😨

Yeah… the forum is basically all that’s left of KP 😟 I get kind of sad when I think about it.

@linus-smallprint

Sounds good.

Whoa! Interrogate is a strong word!

lol

Okay, well i don’t like him very much. he seems weak and kinda sulky. I mean. I don’t know, he’s a coward, and I don’t like cowards. I feel a redemption arch, but at the moment it’s hard to see. So yeah, I’m hoping for redemption, but I’m not liking him right now.

@linus-smallprint

I had no idea what that picture was from. i just saw the meme the other day and thought of it. It was perfect.

Sounds like you are speaking form experience here

Let’s just say, a long time ago, the last fight I had with my brother ended when mom duct taped our wrists together.

For the whole day.

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@linus-smallprint

Ooo, that chapter was very well written. I was feeling very tense, even though I knew what was going to happen. lol.

Yeah, Tyn is in a good position. Have her do it. This will be so, so bad for Eric. Plus, Tyn is in a bad mood, so she may even scold him.

I have never met a guy that didn’t absolutely hate it when a girl scolded him.

@linus-smallprint

Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)

um…. because it was obvious since Martha got captured that he was a liability, and by the chapter you just wrote I knew he was going to get caught or alert the soldiers or something. (I may overstudy literary patterns.)

Sooo, maybe I’m blind, but I’m not seeing the problem……….. w…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

It occurs to me that Sabina and Julian are similar. Both have a brother who became a Christian, and they both thought he had gone crazy, which made them resistant to hearing the gospel and angry at whoever shared it with their brother. So I’m wondering if Sabina is going to recall how she acted and how this may impact her i…

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@the_lost-journal

Did you draw all of these?

@the_lost-journal

Weird. Even after I said it wrong?

How do you generate these, anyway?