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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
*enraged because I was never tagged by KP*
I will look at this as soon as I can. aka tomorrow.
Maybe.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I think we are almost two thirds in?
Okay, sounds good. If needed, you can always catch up after your break.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator
New chapters are out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.
One note: I was very…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 11 months ago
Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?
The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!
I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅
@theducktator Praying!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
I’m going to the BMV to take my learner’s permit test. Please pray that I pass.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 11 months ago
Perfect!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
That worked! I’ll read through it later.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
wait…. did this hot my inbox really late….. or was I on there before it was released?! 😱
I literally just got done commenting and editing chapter 32
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
It just wrapped up, so I should have time now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
No kidding.
Plus someone crashed me yesterday going into town. Add that to the list. 🙄
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
The link won’t let me on for some reason.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Oh no, I completely forgot about that! I’m still interested; it just got lost in the last few weeks of school.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I’m so sorry, I have been swamped. I kept trying, but i just haven’t got the time right now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 11 months ago
Oh yes, an email thread would be best.
Oh, did you see that I have a chapter of the first book out?
I greatly needs your opinion!!
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