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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 13 hours, 7 minutes ago
You are very welcome.
And remember…. I know where you live now…. I will hunt you down and I will find you if you do not post more soon.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 13 hours, 22 minutes ago
YAY!!!!!
Oh wow!!!
I love this!!!
Okay, two things I noticed.
One, you used the word “fell” twice in one sentence referring to the pen.
two… I got the characters mixed up a bit….
Brin and Brinni are the same person.
Krazsimir and Kras are the same….
who is Vrati?
Is he a third character?
If so, could…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 13 hours, 27 minutes ago
You got the section from today I’m assuming….
Or did you write that in reply to what I said yesterday?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 18 hours, 36 minutes ago
Ohhhhh! Now I remember him! My bad—I thought Leon had recognized him.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 18 hours, 42 minutes ago
@freed_and_redeemed  @hybridlore   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty  @linus-smallprint
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Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..
The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.
“Ho…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 18 hours, 46 minutes ago
Of course. I’m thankful God could use me to encourage you in any way. He will help you, if you but ask.
Here’s the full verse and reference.
No trial has overtaken you that is not faced by others. And God is faithful: He will not let you be tried beyond what you are able to bear, but with the trial will also provide a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
Well hey, God has made you this age at this time for a reason. The Devil would love for this year to be a complete and total wreck, but the good thing is, you serve a King who is far higher than any prince of darkness. Pray for strength, get out your Bible and read, (psalms are a great place to go when you’re having a hard time)…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 17 hours ago
as a character
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 17 hours ago
it’s an alternate Europe. If that makes sense.
yeah. Â That was a roller coaster chapter. Any thoughts on Andreas?
Oooo! I’ll have to listen to the song!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 17 hours ago
Ooo, mysterious.
sadly, he’s not any of those. He was very much an Andreas, so I’ll have to find a name with the same flow, beats, meanings, and rhythm.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 19 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 20 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 20 hours ago
They found thirty of fifty+. The others just are no where to be found. So they might be dead.
And yeah they hated it. It was basically a fortress for the Christian operations.
Ah yes, “I”
Does that make sense?
Yes, it does. In fact, I like that idea. I’ll make a few tweaks.
I was confused through these paragraphs.…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
Sorry it wasn’t happy.☹️ Do you at least get to start driving?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 20 hours ago
Odd, I didn’t get tagged when you commented.
Good. I’m glad the timing is right.
yes, it is sad for the university, but that’s not a place they would just let alone.
Well actually, it’s Julian who recognizes Andreas, not Leon.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 21 hours ago
I didn’t get tagged for the last section, so I read them both today. I like it a lot. Linus (?) was right, it was time to go back into the cities. Sad for all those at the University. I like how you showed a threat to the church besides the Soldiers—a threat from the inside. And I’m guessing Andreas is also a former fighter that…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
Happy birthday! 🥳 You’re 15 now, right?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 21 hours ago
@freed_and_redeemed  @hybridlore   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty  @linus-smallprint
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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
June 17th     Â
The EmpireWe’ve been traveling for two days now. No sign of soldiers, thank God. The closer I get the stronger I feel that this is indeed what Go…
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Ruth posted an update 1 day, 22 hours ago
The cover image is a picture of Ugandan Plumerie flowers (not my photo)
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 23 hours ago
Happy birthday!!! 🥳🎂🎈🎈 I hope it was fun!
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