-GRCR-

@keilah-h

lol 😅

Ok.

@keilah-h

Ok sounds, good.

Heres a question, cuz’ I’m new to RPing…heh heh: Do we wait for everyone to get on, or continue? I don’t mind waiting, its just seeming dead…

@keilah-h

😄

@kydonandwillow

Oh boy……. 😶

@acancello

No problem! (Sorry this is late. I didn’t get notified that you responded lol)

@acancello

Yes! You got it! *squeaks in pure joy*

The rivers represent stable-minded people.

I’m glad you like it, and I will definitely tag you! 😆

@kydonandwillow

Gotcha. 🙃

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you! 😊

@kydonandwillow

Ooo… this is getting interesting….

I don’t know why, but Kydon’s thoughts in the last sentence had me laughing.

I don’t have too much to say, but maybe you could combine some of the sentences so that is runs smoother. Like, instead of saying:

• Caleb dropped a box suddenly and it broke open. Bows, arrows, swords, and…

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@kydonandwillow

Awesome! 😄

Ooo.. I’m excited to find out what it is… 😏

@kydonandwillow

It sounds good still! 😀 There are some things that I noticed, though…

I know in the first chapter you mentioned the brick walkway, but you may want to add even more description the twin’s house so the picture is painted better. As the reader, I’m wondering if its large or small? What color are the walls and what kind of…[Read more]

@kydonandwillow

Yay! (sorry this is late… heh heh)

Reading it now… 😁

@kydonandwillow

Ok, I see. 😄

@kydonandwillow

Hi there!

I like it so far. I love the how you wrote it. I thought the part where he put the nightgown in the oven was funny…😄

I’m not fully qualified for editing, but I did have one question….

Is Kydon on his way to give the muffins in the first paragraph of the book? I was a bit confused… at first I thought he was…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh. 😊

…mmm… thats very interesting.

@keilah-h

Oh, I see. …heh heh…

Which do you like better, dinosaurs or dragons?

@keilah-h

😊 …heh heh…

You’re welcome! 🙃 Do you like Jurassic World?

@keilah-h

Hi there!

Thanks! lol 😄

Cool character, too, by the way!

@lydibug

🙃 you’re welcome! 😁