GodlyFantasy12

I kinda struggle with the same thing, so I found all these responses helpful even though they’re not addressed to me. XD

@mineralizedwritings @gwyndalf-the-wise @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @anybodyelse (feel free to ignore)

Not to derail us from answering Godly’s question, (@godlyfantasy12 can…[Read more]

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Guurrl I struggle with the saaame thing. It’s almost like internal conflict is easier to invent than external conflict. XD

First off, I try to consider the character’s inward goal, and try to personify it with an outward goal. It takes a bit to think of one, but as long as you keep your character’s world and culture in mind, it’s…[Read more]

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Got some free time in history so I am going to procrastinate and type up this 😄.

I agree with @smiley that characters are important. I will say that one thing I recommend you do is focus on character development.

For the sake of a common example of what not to do, I would like to use KOTLC (please don’t get mad at me). The…[Read more]

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NOVEMBER! Gosh I love this kid. 😍

@godlyfantasy12

So you could add people (like the village folk) who want to gang control of the kingdom and maybe one of your characters runs into them and they might act out in violence. (Just an idea, I don’t know much about the story so you might have something like this XD Because in a town it’s kind of hard to believe that everyone likes…[Read more]

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Just a question (please don’t get offended I am just kind of confused). Why is Ara looking for clues boring? I mean that is like basically the way all mystery stories work. I can probably help you with more details on what makes it feel boring though could give you pointers without it if you want.

As forNovembers plot i…[Read more]

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OH MY GOODNESS I LUV NOVEMBER SO MUCH!!!

and I love his aesthetic tooooooo

@hybridlore

Alrighty, I’m going to tag some people now XD. I usually forget to, lol

@gwyndalf-the-wise @thearcaneaxiom @landric @awsumfaith @smiley @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @all-those-i-have-forgotten

@feolin-faith Ooo thank you for taking the time to write out that whole response, it was very fascinating to read through. There was much truth in it. I will definitely take a look at that article you mentioned as well! I personally do not like the dystopian genre very much so it will be interesting to learn why so many are drawn to it… I could…[Read more]

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Ooooh, wait wait wait, I’m forgetting what sirens are for some reason 🤦‍♀️ (the brain, just not working XD XD)

@godlyfantasy12

AHH!!! I love him so much!!! 🥰

Love the aesthetic too!!! 😆

(Also, he and his family have the same last name as Ami’s fam…

…Are they long lost relatives from a different dimension??? 😱😂)

@sarafini

All of that sounds so cool! XD I feel like we’re in the same stage, both trying to get a license and perhaps moving out lol.

Oh, that’s great! Beta readers can be such a help, that would be awesome if you published to amazon too!

@godlyfantasy12

I thought that too, but if you check the website for the event, it seems to be about a…[Read more]

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PHERVIN

They were nearing a kitchen, he could just feel it. He took in a lungful of air, imagining the lovely scent of anuni pie. He looked backward to their sullen crew. Miss Prickly had been quiet since her outburst, and Namal monitered her and Mr Pokey Pokey closely.

Phervin stifled a sad sigh. Nam had had t…[Read more]

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Woooohoooo! I love November!

@godlyfantasy12

*Gasp* I’ve been waiting to hear about November!!!!

*Steals a handful of @esther-c ‘s popcorn*

*And a cookie*

@godlyfantasy12

Yay!!!

*eagerly waits while chomping down on some popcorn and warm chocolate chip cookies*

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper

I’ll let Whaley go next in our group if she wants. We could just stop it there though and go on to the next day. I don’t really care either way.

@freedom

uh oh…I have a feeling something bad might happen 😅

Maybe… lol XD

When Ev is mad at someone, he tends to be passive aggressive, so sometim…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I’m not even a part of this, but that sounds hilarious 😂

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Erebus

Erebus walked by Erich’s side, as they went deeper into the darkness.

His heart beat in his chest. Darkness. Again. No light. Nothing. Just darkness.

He listened to Erich’s steady breathing next to him.

Surrounded by darkness, yes, but not alone… not this time.

Erebus smiled to himself, grateful to not…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22

That sounds good to me! 😀

And that way Dylan and Liren could have their rap battle 😏

XDXD Oh yess