GodlyFantasy12

@godlyfantasy12 I’m pretty sure AU’s of your own universe count.

And that’s funny, I’m the opposite: I draw a complete blank when it comes to an original idea longer than a short chapter book (and even then it’s a long and tedious process), but I can write, or at least plan, like 15 long-ish fanfics at once.

I think it’s having set character…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @princesachronicle22 @smiley @sarafini @euodia-vision @whalekeeper

Alright! Here are my charries’ schedules!

Fynn

Algebra I

English

PE (elective)

LUNCH!!!

Science

History

Karate/Martial arts (elective)

Lukas

Algebra I

English

Art (elective)

LUNCH!!!

Science

History

Karate/Martial a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

THX!! I love them too, or at least as much as someone can healthily love a pair of imaginary characters XD

I love how you mentioned the fact that sometimes love isn’t real love – and I also love how many times I used the word love in this sentence XDXD And the whole ‘love equals solution’ thing. There are so many messed up views…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

OK thanks

I’ll add her later tonight

@godlyfantasy12

GREAT!! 😂😂

So both the charries need each other in order to reach their goals.

Thorn is a determined archeologist, with a rich, fashionable background and a rare, top secret handicap.

Calvin is a historian and philosopher in the making – who, along with his family, has a dangerous relationship with the church.

Thorn needs Cal,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Can you help me with Cal and Thorn’s friends-to-lovers relationship? I don’t know how to shift them from friends to lovers without being stiff or cheesy 🤔😭

@godlyfantasy12 cool! Still not sure how my characters’ day will go…..

I need to look at the schedule again, lol.

@godlyfantasy12

Hmmm okay I can see that, makes more sense

(Btw this is just my opinion, so with a grain of salt pleeze 😊)

Obviously there’s going to be some people who just want power, and it makes sense for them to make a big deal out of the snakeAra thing.

I would say tho that yeah, she WAS just a child, it’s easy to understand she…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Ok!

@euodia-vision lol how you described Tech….

@godlyfantasy12 you can skip to the next day if you want! Are my boys in a class with Paxton by any chance? I remember we were trying to get them to meet (and maybe have them stand up to his bully brothers)

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, and be sure to show how the people are being negatively affected through actions, not just dialogue. Give examples, in some of the charries’ lives, of why the people feel this way.

@esther-c

No probs, you’ll do great!!

@godlyfantasy12

Oki-dokie I love trying to help with these XD

The first question that comes to mind, is, why are the people resentful of the royal family? Why are they low-key rebelling?

There should be a clear, important reason – that requires action.

I can see the whole ‘royalty’s just a symbol’ being…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin @folith-feolin @godlyfantasy12

Thanks y’all for the help!!

I almost forgot, but one charrie is going to have a negative arc, so I guess that could be what Godly called, like, becoming numb or dying spiritually/emotionally.

And I think another charrie is going to receive a life threatening injury and it’s going to affect Ami a l…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Oooh, I like that aesthetic! November’s a cool character (and his name is awesome too)

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Godly, did you want to RP as Ridley meeting Erich and Erebus?

@godlyfantasy12

lol XD

Yes, very different. 😅😂

@godlyfantasy12 LOL LOVE IT!!

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

 

Lesli stands back in shock, looking down at Acheron, then at Luna.

“Luna?” Lesli echoes Tauren.

Tauren slowly picks up Acheron’s sword.

Not much heavier than my pickaxe.

He steps back, still watching him warily.

“THAT WAS EPIC!” Lesli exclaims. She raises Luna’s hand in…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Calvin

Calvin nodded, with a slow, comforting smile. “Totally fine. I guess I get pretty scary when I’ve been up for forty-eight hours straight.”

Then, to Wolfgang – “Sorry about Marcel, too. He won’t apologize when he’s grumpy.”

@godlyfantasy12

😳😳😳😳

OH MY GOSH GIRL THAT WAS AWESOME XDXDXD

And I TOTALLY agree. That is the best thing I’ve imagined all week XDXD

Great job writing that!! I love Luna so much

@freedom

Arrgh, I know! I had to do this same thing a while back, and grr it’s so frustrating because sometimes it just has to be done… I mean, tropes became tropes because everyone thought they were a good idea, sooo…. There must be something there, right? XD

Anyway, I’ve got a few random thoughts (this might not be helpful because I have…[Read more]