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whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Gus
Gus snickered softly when the fox exploded over being perceived as a babe. He played with the hem of his overalls, but purposefully said nothing back. After all, the fox was a babe, if only emotionally.
All new recruits were babes. And they had to get used to it real quick, without any smart mouth.
The fox scuffed up the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
We could go to camp, and then have the dance right after, as a back-to-school celebration? We’d have to ask people tho
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Yeah XD We could start a separate RP where the characters go to camp together. It could be sponsored by Destina Tasin itself! How would it fit in the school timeline, though?
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whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
It’s aliiiiive… it’s aliiiiive… IT’S ALIIIIVE
XD I’m sorry, I had to.
Gus
Gus stood up and slowly veered around the fire, white eyelashes fluttering as he tried to blink away the runes pressing against his cheeks. “Why are you so small? I’ve never seen such a tiny junebug in all my life before.”
Most Horns stood on their…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
It’s okay!! Hard to keep track sometimes, yeah? Here, he’s set up a fire and Nyx can wake up 😊
Gus
Within roughly thirty minutes, red-hot embers were flickering in the air like the souls of fireflies. A small wood pile crackled as Gus sat on a log, staring up at the sky, where he knew there would be an abundance of beautiful sta…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@freedomwriter76 lol I can see Jennie calling Crosshair “handsome,” but “young” is a bit of a stretch, especially if she hasn’t seen him up close–considering the mutations which gave him exceptional eyesight among other things also turned his hair gray, and I’m pretty sure the emotional torture he received doesn’t help him either. He probably…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
PRIORITIES, FREEDOM, PRIORITIES! 🤣
Wow there’s a speech I need to hear
PRIORITIES SMILEY PRIORITIES!!
And I’d love to see more of your fanfic!!
and I understand the whole trying to find time for everything
I really need to put in some major work on Project Elites, or losing you, or hoping the horizon……[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Anyone Need Some Editing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Ofc!!
Probably just a structural kind of editing, to see how it flows and if anything feels off. 😊
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Karissa Chmil replied to the topic Anyone Need Some Editing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Eyy, this is so exciting, @godlyfantasy12! *throws confetti* Congrats on jumping into this! (Editors are amazing. 😁)
I’m currently finishing up line edits on a novella called Buried Stars, and chapter six is throwing me a bit. If you have time, I’d love it if you could look at some of the phrasing!
I’ll drop the link below, but relevant…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Marcel
Marcel gave Riker a half-smile, and leaned to one side so Pax might see him.
Pax didn’t notice. He was staring wide-eyed at a bright screen, with a look of complete contentment, and held Leo’s hand.
Marcel brushed a strand of pink fluff out of his eyes. If you guys want… um… I’ll be at the old soda foun…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic How to create new, yet beloved characters? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I love creating characters, and I consider myself moderately good at it 😅
However, I’ve come across this new problem. I’ve had this one WIP – which I’ve picked up again – for years. I’ve improved it a lot and rebooted the characters in ways I am willing to dedicate my story to. But I feel as if it would benefit from new side characters as…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Hey guys!
So Godly, if you see this, I’m going to assume that Nyx couldn’t handle the waves and is unconscious from, well, either suggestion Gus makes here 😊
Gus
Despite his fierceness, the little fox seemed to have taken quite a beating. After a few seconds struggling to balance on his legs, whether from falling against the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @grcr @lydibug @godlyfantasy12
I’m finally going to join in with her!
Skyraptor
She awoke on the sand. Ugh. It itched on her feathers.
Where was…..
Her master’s thoughts were obscured! She could barely hear his thoughts, and what she could hear was so muffled and echo-y she couldn’t tell what he was…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Peanuts was awesome! And the movie was super cute.
My favorites of the comics were always the drawing ones….where one character would draw another and make funny comments about that person…..
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whaley replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 1 year, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @esther-c
I know this was days ago, but here’s my OTHeR two cents…
Min and Esther are totally right (that article was great, Esther!). So, that.
I can’t say my advice is solid because I’ve never actually finished a book yet – but this is mostly observations I’ve made, and a mix of articles I’ve read. So…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Yeah, I get it and I’m not really worried about it, I guess I was just responding to Min’s comment. Tbf, a lot of people do stalk this forum before joining, but Ig in that case it’s usually a teenager/Christian writer who will end up joining anyway.
Either way works, but if you want to leave it open like this, yeah, no one should…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Oh okay!
@mineralizedwritingsActually, I don’t think so. If Godly added all of us and left the link open to anyone on the internet, THEN anyone could see our emails. But the way it is right now, anyone can see it, anyone can edit it, even without an account, and it doesn’t show your profile.
Idk if you’re wanting us to put our…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@acancello
It’s everyone I think!!@mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12
What do you want us to comment??
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
That would mean that anyone on kp (whether a forum member or random internet surfer) could have access to our emails though, right? I’m not trying to say I have some better idea 😂 I don’t XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I can get on! Looks like it’ll let me leave a comment too. How do you want to do this? We could each leave a comment, then you could lock it to just those accounts? Idk, whatever you think works!
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