GodlyFantasy12

@rae The Miska Chronicles, but it’s more like a WOFC (Work in the Filing Cabinet)

I have only been able to discover/learn about 350-500 years of Miskan history, but most of that knowledge generally falls within the last 130 year. (This was when a brilliant ruler (I believe it was Queen Esma the Loyal, but don’t quote me on that.) final came to…[Read more]

@jonas 🤨😏😁

@freedomwriter76

(Ok so I didn’t get notified for this until just today. 🤦🏻‍♀️😂)

Awwww, the boissss!! 😭❤️

@loopylin

O.O

I LOVE IT!! 😍❤️🤣 Oh my stars thank you so much, that cheered me up, it’s thAt cute. AAAUUURrGH it’s so adorable. *HugzyoubecauseIreallywantto* You’re so sweet 😊❤️

Shall I write something astonishing (And that might get my head bit off)? 😜

Swords are overrated.

Bows and pole weapons are much better.

@rae

Oh and the paragraph about heaven and hell didn’t seem too preachy. I mean, I think it’s fine to have it in there since it was really short. Great job on the description of that, too! I think it works well.

@rae

I thought it ended really well, I liked the mentor-y moment with Master Paul! I didn’t really understand what Cubespace was entirely, so the whole incident confused me a little.

I think Master Paul asked Nahim to fly the ship, but Nahim said no, so the Master left him there on the controls? And then Nahim stabilized it and went to yell at…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, that’s happened to me too before!

@thearcaneaxiom

I like it! Thing is my favorite, lol. I don’t think you should change the name even though it’s a little mean, but it’s up to you. I think it fits her and she likes it, so it works.

The plot is a little confusing to me… a lot of the philosophy/science stuff goes over my head but that’s fine, lol. Anyway, nice job so far! I…[Read more]

@loopylin

DANTE.

He always makes me smile. Always.

@calyhuge

Wow you caught on fast. I’m kinda amazed

It wasn’t too hard 😂😋

@rae

Okay, phew! Finally caught up. And yeah, Chapter 7 isn’t showing up for me… so I guess I’m not, lol.

The biggest things I noticed were again, really long paragraphs. I think it would be easier to read if you split them up, but it’s up to you.

And long sections of dialogue without tags, like this:

“You can…”

“Read, write, and speak i…

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@jonas

Okay, I actually don’t think I’ll join… Thanks, though!

@jonas

Oh yeah that’s happened to me before. Idk why. 🤷🏻‍♀️ If I have to edit a post, I’ll just edit it, copy it, then submit the edit just in case it deletes.

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!!

Plotting isn’t always easy for me, so that’s encouraging to hear. 😊

I’ll try to get to writing a RP later today, but I’m not sure if that will happen. 😅 I haven’t gotten to it this week because life has been pretty busy. 🙃

@rae

I like the one with the girl face silhouette!!

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr  @esther-c @jonas @rae @trailblazer

Kaine leans against the old wooden window sill. Steady rain patters the outside of the glass, obscuring the faint glow of starlight. He stares at the three moons hanging in the sky, creating a light reflection in the collecting puddles. Kaine presses his face onto the…[Read more]

@calyhuge

…

Is Narana who I think she is?