GodlyFantasy12

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooh, I’m kinda struggling with something similar with a new WIP idea.

What I’ve been starting to notice is that you have to weigh the importance of each scene. Is each scene impacting the MCs arc in some way? How does it move along the plot? And sometimes some scenes will feel slow, but that’s not always a bad thing. Brain…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad I could offer some helpful input!

Ooh, can’t wait to read this next chapter later today!!

@keilah-h

Hehehe… 😂

@trailblazer

Thanks so much!! That’s what I was going for! 😊

Also may or may not have just almost tagged you as easter-c XD.

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I had Sunday school teachers when I was young that would spell my name that way. I was so confused how anyone could get my name wrong!! XD And now sometimes my friends or siblings call me Easter jus…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Oh my goodness hi Min!! <3 It has been awhile, I’m sorry I haven’t been very active lately 🙁 I was actually just thinking about getting on and chatting with you ❤🥰

Don’t apologize! There’s nothing wrong with not being active at all. I haven’t been active much either, school and drawing are just a little more important lol. But…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness hi Min!! <3 It has been awhile, I’m sorry I haven’t been very active lately 🙁 I was actually just thinking about getting on and chatting with you ❤🥰

Life is going good!! I’ve been like really happy lately and it’s great :)) Yesterday was such a great day, Easter is always so good. And I’ve gotten to spend a…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

How’s it going? How’s life?

I just feel like its been awhile lol

Also it totally feels like spring over here rn, like the birds are chirping outside and everything 😁

@keilah-h

Cool!

@keilah-h

XD For real!

@rae

Ooh, this looks fun! I’m not sure if I’ll be able to join (I’m already so behind in my other rps! 😭) but I might eventually. I’ll probably stick around and see what happens first. It looks really fun.

@savannah_grace2009

I forgot to tag you a second time in my post. Part of my rely to you is the last quote and paragraph on the post above the post above this one. (That’s unnecessarily complicated…. XDD)

@keilah-h

I honestly don’t mind multiple POVs from first person, because the time I read it, each chapter was labeled with the character’s name so you knew who was speaking. But yeah, I see how it could get confusing.

@stephie

Yeah, plotting is probably one of my weaker points of writing. 😂 The extent to which I plot varies from story to story and I’m not sure if that’s a good thing… XD

Another suggestion would be to try and write the worst first draft you could possibly write. That’s how my dad got more than 100% on a university level essay.

I may just ha…[Read more]

@keilah-h @grcr @lightoverdarkness6

Thanks!! Scenes like these are what get me excited about this story. I love these charries too so much. 🥰

@esther-c

Oh my goodness I LOVE this girl 🤩🤩🤩 It’s soooo cute ❤🥰

@freed_and_redeemed

AH YAY YOU’RE BACK *hug*

And AH Riker😭😭😭😭

1. Yes, I think it’s pretty realistic, you did a great job writing it. I’ve had small panic attacks before and they’re definitely not fun heh. I’m sure when someone’s cornered like that they’re not going to be thinking straight or exactly rational so his desperateness made sense. I…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Aw, thanks! He’s very new, not even a week old XD I think he is scaly all over, but other than the color, they are not immediately distinguishable from skin because they are smooth and small. But the scales are rough and textured if they are closer to the horns and back of the head.

Random tagssss @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @rae @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @acancello @grcr @anyone-else-cuz-i-can’t-think-of-anyone-else-right-now

Ignore tag or read on!

Just wanted to share a cute scene from a WIP that I’ve been working on a little too much. 😉 I seriously should be working on my main WIP rn, but whatever.

It’s not p…[Read more]

@rae

Oki, coooooooool

@rae

Lol, you’re good 😂

Yes, he does have issues with his personality. Because of the way his brain develops when he’s younger, he has a lot of mood swings.

When I asked if you have issues with his personality, I meant, is his personality not functioning well for you as a writer? Like, from an outside perspective, a character’s personality can b…[Read more]