GodlyFantasy12

@linus-smallprint Please correct me if I’m wrong about guys

The illustrations are great! I love the sibling drawing.

I don’t know what that would be! If they were girls it would be easy! I just don’t know how guys “connect” and whenever I try to write it my brothers look like they’re going to throw up. They say I make them too girly in their getting to know each other, so I just kinda steer clear. An…

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Oh wow I missed y’all’s messages XD

@ellette-giselle

I would still love feedback on the other stuff as we went, but I’m a little at a loss with Aaron at the moment.

Thank y’all so, so much. I hope y’all can tell that this really is helpful…… I can see there’s a problem now…… I just have to fix it………

I understand what it feels like to get mixed feedback about a character, it’s so fr…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

*squeals* So good to see—er, hear?—um, talk? to you again!!! 😂

Oh yes, I understand the busyness. Our summer has also been purty busy. 😬 But it’s been so good. I have a summer job and between the times I’m working I was able to babysit for our old youth pastor’s son. 😊

Our church also had VBS a few weeks ago and I was the c…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

My goodness Whaley!!! You put into coherent thoughts what I’ve been trying to say this whole time XD XD I wish I could convey my thoughts as well as you lol!

No prob! And no bad thoughts from you about yourself!! I only convey thoughts well through journaling/writing :] Trust me, if you knew me irl, I am quite slow with my t…[Read more]

Sorry Sara, I tagged you in the above message instead of Ellette. So if you get an extra notif, that’s why. 😅

@savannah_grace2009

oh nooooo!! Say it isn’t so!!

I’m sorry 😭😕

I love Aaron so much!! He is my secret big brother, and now he’s under attack!! Ok, I will try to take into consideration what you two have been saying. It’s going to be hard, especially since he’s perfect in my mind, so it’ll be tough to figure out how to improve him.

It might be…[Read more]

Aight I’ll resurrect it with some ranting

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @godlyfantasy12 (Asked for tags but she’s gone 😥)

I’ve never gone crazy over my own characters because it’s not my personality I guess. But I just want to say, I have a semi-new character relationship which is actually my favorite right now.

In one…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It is!! I will probably post some more ideas soon.

I also don’t think everyone needs my advice/ideas because each person thinks in their own way. But I don’t know who will randomly see this topic and be helped by it. So again, anyone can give tips here because it might be of use in the future.

@loopylin

I like the Twins’ cute scrunchy noses

Hey Ellette! I read through all the scenes so far, and although I’m not going to do a scene-by-scene critique, I can give you overall thoughts. Please read this with a grain of salt! 😅

I like the Crusades-ish concept, where different people are invading Ardenta partially to spread their own belief system. It makes Aaron look like a go-between and…[Read more]

@theducktator

Ohh, I gotcha. Yeah, I’ve heard that’s it’s really good for focus, but I never really wrote down much of my writing (besides outlining and rambling) on paper. I guess I prefer doing the actual writing on an electronic.

Oh, lol! 🤣 Are you homeschooled, or do you go to public school?

@theducktator I like your signature, by the way lol.

Do you find it easier to handwrite? Is it more efficient for you?

@theducktator
Oh, haha! Yeah, I definitely made progress, even though there’s not much on the page.
I’ll probably keep going, but not time it. Thanks for sprinting!

@theducktator

Well, it wouldn’t tell me how many words I’ve written since I’m on my phone, but I got some done! Lol. How did you do?

@theducktator

Sounds good! You can reply to that later if you want, lol.

@theducktator Are you starting now? And (if you don’t mind me asking) what are you working on? I’m not sure if I’ve heard anything about your WIP.

@theducktator Sure!

Oh sorry haha I thought you meant it would be on that date. Never mind, perfect.