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LivGiordano replied to the topic Including the gospel without being cheesy in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@daeus This is amazing. Thank you for sharing. @filewriterbase13x I think you might like this. Pretty relevant, right?
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@filewriterbase13x You can use me if you wish (I’ve been mentioned before as a droid), but by all means you don’t have to.
I’m sure your story will be great!
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@sam-kowal I seem to remember Stan’s “heavy metal death screams” being mentioned before. 😉 😀
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@celticcailin Hi! I love music, but I don’t write lyrics (I play cajon.)
I think @dekreel , @sam-kowal , and @alia write songs, though. (Tell me if I’m wrong, guys!)
Good luck on your music!
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valtmy replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years, 1 month ago
My rule of thumb is that main characters should be both bright and deep. “Bright” as in they have some qualities that you (and hopefully your readers) find interesting (note: this is not the same as likable or attractive). “Deep” means that these traits come from a source (the characters’ past or background) that should at least be…[Read more]
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice WOAH. I’m so scared. I’m so scared. My word, reading Manly with Chessy was so heartbreaking :'( And Zachary and Justice being cousins gives this a different dynamic. I’m so scared. AHHHHHHHH
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Outlining – Love It or Hate It? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@waterlily Nope. I don’t outline before I start. The most I ever do is write a couple of ideas for the next two or three scenes and have a general idea of how the story is probably going to end.
Sometimes it doesn’t turn out the best, but, hey, that’s what editing is for. 🙂
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valtmy replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Yep that was the plan. That’s why I introduced plot points such as the other members of the imperial family, the history of the empire, the assassin etc. because they will be relevant to the ‘adventure’ part of things.
But not everything was linking up and making sense. That’s why I have been stuck on this story for a long time and I…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Glad you liked it!
My original idea was a sort of Man vs God thing. It draws upon the belief that our lives are ruled by “Fate” that was prevalent in ancient China.
Basically the setting is a story world where “Fate” appears to cause lots of silly love stories to happen and the “Rules” are basically just all the…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Hmm… yes maybe that will work. I was planning on having a more sweeping epic but maybe a tighter story might suit the premise better. Thanks!
Sure no problem.
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@skye That’s a good list of authors. 🙂
😀 Actually, yes, BTD is where my username originally came from. I started using it years ago and it’s just kinda stuck. I’m assuming you’ve played the game, because you’re the first one to ask that.
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Hello there! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@juliawrites4christ Welcome to the best (and
strangest) place on the Internet!We always need more Narnia fans! 😉 My personal favorite is The Silver Chair.
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
@skye Welcome to KP!
It’s cool that you write medieval fantasy. I don’t see too much of that. 🙂
Any favorite authors?
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice I finished it. AHHH I just LOVE how you tied Les Mis and AToTC together! That is So. Cool! But all the sadness. *cries* So soon. It’s too much o_o Until there’s more, of course!
Also *shakes finger* Poor @rochellaine *hands you some tissues*
XD Chessy and Justice, I didn’t really think they should get together at the end of Stars…[Read more]
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valtmy started the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
I have a problem.
I tend to start off writing well but I have trouble deciding how to continue my stories. This causes me to get stuck and saps away my motivation to write. For my WIP, I have been trying to see if outlining will help but outlining is hard when I’m not sure how I want my story to go.
So just to try something new I’m putting one…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 1 month ago
Welcome fellow INTJ to the bestistest place on the internet! Hope you enjoy yourself here! 😀
So what are your favourite books?
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valtmy replied to the topic Private Messaging in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 1 month ago
Yeah I think I might do that. Thanks!
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valtmy replied to the topic Is this boring???? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
I agree with what everyone else has said. I think the problem has to do with the pacing and the passiveness of the main character. There is a lot of description that slow the story down and much of the information conveyed through dialogue could have easily been summed up in a few lines.
Just some thoughts…
#1: The article in the…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Private Messaging in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 1 month ago
I might consider that. Thanks!
Haha I know you guys are all really nice. The problem is that people outside the KP forums can access it as well and I’m shy about my writing. 😳
Hmm… I did think about using that feature but I know not everyone may want to give out their email so I wanted to check if…[Read more]
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 1 month ago
Hey guys! 😀 So seems like everyone’s taking a hiatus. 😛 I’m going to as well. Whatnot with NaNo, School, blogging and trying to get my book ready for publication, I need more time than I have. So I shall return, but for now, I’m on a vacation. I’ll still be posting on my blog and I’ll be on facebook too. 😀 Visit me!
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Aw, you too?! *sniffs* this is too much.
Well I hope you have a great hiatus! 🙂 We’ll have to have some celebratory part when you, Dekreel, and Warren return. 😉 when do you think you’ll be back?
Not you too! *sighs* When will you return? Can I still tag you?
@jenwriter17 @ariel-ashira Absolutely you can still tag me. 🙂 I just might not be able to respond all the time, but I love hearing from you all. <3
And I expect to return within a week or few. Certainly no longer than May 1.
@dragon-snapper Okay! 😀 At least you guys aren’t taking super long hiatuses 🙂
*waves good bye to another friend* Please return… You will be missed.
So long for now, Chosen Kid. :3