@freedomdreamer
Active 1 year, 9 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Gwyndalf the Wise and GodlyFantasy12 are now friends 1 year, 10 months ago
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Charityanne replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Yes the poem is called A Kitten.😊
If you’re referring to where to pause in each paragraph that would be where the commas are.
hope that’s what you were looking for.
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic How do y'all keep your focus on the Lord while writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 10 months ago
Keeping God first when writing is really hard. It’s in our sinful nature to do things that glorify or bring recognition to us. And it’s a temptation that’s hard to resist. Fame is not bad! Don’t get me wrong. It’s just that when that’s all we look forward to, our end goal, then our focus is no longer on God.
Yes, yes it tis. And I get w…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic How do y'all keep your focus on the Lord while writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76
Cool!Heh, sorry I wasn’t clear. I think you summed it up pretty well, though. I meant how do you put God first while you’re writing.
Cool!
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Charityanne started the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
I stretch and yawn and run about I’m small and cute to see, I love to leave my small footprints wherever you have cleaned.
I sit and cuddle in your lap when I think it’s convenient, I know that I must be the best ‘cause to me you’re very lenient.
And when you are angry with me, I’m bashful on the spot, no one could ever keep a grudge against s…[Read more]
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Charityanne replied to the topic Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Beautifully done! Amazing! Inspiring! Dazzling! Marvelous!
very good very good👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Applause everyone applause!
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Charityanne started the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
A rustling wind, a shuddering chill, a woodpeckers knock on your windowsill…
The golden brown fields in the sun and the rain, like deer running past is the weather today…
A clear autumn sky full of dazzling stars, with seasons like this aren’t we glad that they’re ours.
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Charityanne started the topic The story of a Posy in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
I am a little posey, I look into the sky, I love the bright and cheery days when birds go flying by,
the rainy days are lovely too wear underneath my shade, the little bugs come scudding where they need not be afraid.
My closest friends come to maintain the ground in which I live, I haven’t much to bless them with, but the fragrance that I give.
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Charityanne replied to the topic Daydream in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Thanks!
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Charityanne and Elanor are now friends 1 year, 10 months ago
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
XD
That looks amazing!
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Charityanne replied to the topic Daydream in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
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Charityanne and MineralizedWritings are now friends 1 year, 10 months ago
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Gwyndalf the Wise and MineralizedWritings are now friends 1 year, 10 months ago
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Charityanne and Loopy are now friends 1 year, 10 months ago
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Gwyndalf the Wise started the topic How do y'all keep your focus on the Lord while writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 10 months ago
@anyone who wants to discuss or answer this @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @booksandbeakers @orielle21 @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian
So…
I’ve been struggling to remember to focus on God while writing lately, although today was better.
I’ve found that listening to praise &…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Talking about Mental Illnesses/Disorders/Disabilities that our characters have in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@everyone
This is not the topic you are looking for.
WOAH
This is the first topic that was eaten…
Pay no attention to this topic…
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Resources for Writing Mental Illnesses/Disorders/Disabilities in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
I’m planning to, so I can keep myself accountable. =) I have a hard time writing otherwise. I’m working on things to share with y’all on characters today as my crazy writing for today’s sprint.
I’ll probably post it on the Charrie Chat topic, or make a new one (this depends if I end up working on worldbuilding too, if that happens I’ll…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Resources for Writing Mental Illnesses/Disorders/Disabilities in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
@everyone
Sorry for the repeat, don’t know how that happened…
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
AH GIRL THAT’S A GREAT SCENE <3
*standing ovation, literal round of applause*
You almost made me cry… AGH LEO I RELATE SO MUCH
…Leo’s gonna get redeemed, right?
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