freedomdreamer

@freedomwriter76

Ooh, yes, I know that song. It’s already on his playlist. 😂 Do you mean Tenth Avenue North tho…not Sidewalk Prophets…? I’m just trying to clarify.

*facepalm* Yes, it’s by Tenth Avenue North. I was telling someone else about Sidewalk Prophets and thought I was on their youtube page when I was listening to the song…

Thank you!!! &#x1f49…

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@freedomwriter76
Heh, should’ve listened to the song before telling you about it. I think the lyrics fit Jakob. XD I’m not a fan of the actual music.

@freedomwriter76

JAKOB AGH NO BUDDY DON’T FALL FOR REVENGE!!!!

…if Jakob knew the Lord I think the song “Losing” by Sidewalk Prophets fits him.

I like the scene.

…so Wolfgang is getting more than one medicine? Cause in the first part Leo was getting the medicine… or maybe I’m misremembering, I dunno

@sarafini

XD Springing character deaths on people is terrible if you’re the person it’s sprung on, but great if you’re the springer…

My parents are like that, at least they really want to read my writing… I’m just not great at sharing and explaining, but I’m going to work on that.

@sarafini

Aw. Hope to see you next time, though. =)

@freedomwriter76
YESSSSS XD I most definitely remember.

AHHHHHHHHH JOSHUA!!!!!

…Freedom, how do you do this? You keep making me almost cry…
It’s a great scene, by the way. Very relatable.

@princesachronicle22
Okay! =)

@otherworldlyhistorian
Ah. Yeah, I’m not against having grief in books and portraying it realistically, but I don’t want to read a book/watch a movie and leave it with a sense of hopelessness.

@godlyfantasy12
YEah, I like it when my favorite come back to life, but usually my favorites stay dead and the obnoxious character I didn’t like lives. *sadness*

@otherworldlyhistorian
1. They’re just one of millions of casualties. Their death has no purpose. The author just had it there for feels.

4. I’m not sure I understand your…[Read more]

@otherworldlyhistorian
Hmmmm
I only appreciate character deaths when:

1. They aren’t dying just because.

2. Their death contributes to someone’s character arc.

3. Their death contributes to the story’s theme.

4. The death doesn’t become the focus of the story.

5. They actually stay dead. XD However, this depends on the story, I’ve seen…[Read more]

@esther-c
Oh, cool! XD Yeah, I can see the similarities to America…

@otherworldlyhistorian
Ah, okay.

@karissa-chmil
I think I may have seen you, but I’m not sure…and yes, it’s amazing XD

I know @felicity and @charityanne and @freedomdreamer are on there, but I dunno about anyone else…

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
If y’all want, I can always have Teilo and Evander and the thing that is attacking them show up. Totally up to you guys though!

@esther-c
Aw, thanks! And no worries, but I’ll look forward to when you do. =)

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c
I love the moodboards!

@otherworldlyhistorian
Yeah, Mineralized is correct, it stands for ‘The Young Writer’s Workshop’…or something like that, I don’t remember.

@godlyfantasy12
Aw, thanks!! XD I was very worried that it wasn’t very good cause I’m really bad at descriptions.
XD the silver one is Derek, my snarky thief. I’m glad you like them!!!

@loopylin
Yeah, I couldn’t think of a way that they’d immediately recognize what type of building they’re in, so *inserts magical plaque that answers…[Read more]

@esther-c @princesachronicle22

XD I totally underestimated how hard it is to write roleplays.
And sorry about the formatting in advance, I’ve never done this before…

Luca
*swoosh-y noises* *characters successfully transported*
He stood up, confounded.
“WE JUST GOT EATEN BY THE FLOOR!”
…
“WE JUST GOT DIGESTED!”

Derek
Where are we? It’s dark…[Read more]

@esther-c
XD Spoilers without context. I love it! I also have no idea who Dao is, so now I must finish reading your story.
XD I have a different series and my favorite character ends up dying for reasons I’m unsure of, I just know he has to die. Which sounds terrible…but true.
XD NOOO LUKAS STAY WITH ME BUDDY
Yay! Lukas lives!