@freed_and_redeemed
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
OH MY GOODNESS!!! Those are amazing!!!!!
I can’t wait!!!! I like the slave the best. (forgot his name)
And the prince!!!!
Check one page back. Freedom just posted Character Boards
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Ooooo!!! Very intrigued!!! (but I might be biased because I’m interested in anything you write! XD)
It’s very funny…. but as I work through my WWII set, I’ve just had an amazing idea for a fantasy. I wonder it WWII triggers fantasy ideas…….. lolololol.
I hope this doesn’t delay the last book with Leon and Riker…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Glad you found something new to be passionate about!! I hope the writing goes well!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Hi Freedom! I am intrigued. have you developed how these different arcs blend into the overall story? What’s the worldbuilding you’ve done like so far?
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TheShadow replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Interesting…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Consider me interested. =D
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
AHHH GIRL I LOVE THIS
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed Beautiful boards!! I want to meet the characters now 😆
Also, this is random, but I had this memory the other day of when I first joined KP and your signature said you were the Queen of Emojis on KP 😂 Do you remember that?
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
AH, I love the boards!! I think my favorite one is either Acheron’s or Jared’s!! 😀
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-GRCR- replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed First off, these boards are cool and the characters look amazing.
Second, what a weird coincidence in your name and role selection for the female character—“Jaelryn” is weirdly close to “Jaylen,” the name of a character I have whose codename is Huntress. Her hair’s a bit shorter and darker than your character’s, and her eyes…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Nice! Jared’s is my favorite.
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hybridlore replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Ooooohhh!! That’s exciting! I want to hear more about it if you post! 😁
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The Ducktator replied to the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Fantasy is my favorite genre! I want to see aesthetics!
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Loopy replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 3 months, 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed ^^ messed up your tag again
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Ellette Giselle posted an update 3 months, 1 week ago
So……
I FINISHED!!!!
I had a crazy week,l but I was finally able to sit down yesterday and I read the whole thing!
It was well done. I like the story so much, and I’m really looking forward to the next book!!! I’m really excited for it! I definitely love Riker the best still, and I’m very happy that he and Leon have…[Read more] -
Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 months, 1 week ago
@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @ifyouknowAlwin @anyone
Ok… You know that one character? The one who is disturbingly realistic? If I make a thread sometime later this month about handling dark topics in a God glorifying way, this is why.
Meet Letice, Alwin’s mother. I love her, but I heard her story years ago and…[Read more]
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Esther posted an update 3 months, 1 week ago
Ok, I’m tagging a lot of people for this, but don’t feel obligated to reply.
So, I’ve gotten stuck in my current WIP, but as I work through that slowly, I want to return to an older WIP that I worked on over the summer and really want to refine. It’s only in a first draft, but I’d like to have a critique partner for it.
The type of critique…[Read more]-
Actually, I’mma remake the moodboards, hehehe. So they shall be revealed later this week. :PP
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I replied but didn’t tag you. Not sure if you got it.
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I would be willing to try and help with this. You know my views on Romance are rather different than norm, and I believe highschool romantic relationships aren’t healthy. But I’m willing to give it a shot.
I also do edit. I’m not a line-by-line editor, but I have worked as a plot/character/story editor before.
We do have different beliefs on…[Read more]-
I appreciate the offer!! Truly!
But like you said, we might not work super well together because of our different viewpoints. So yeah, right now I’d say no, but I will keep you in mind! :))-
No problem! I can be your last resort if no one else offers. 😉
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Sounds good. 😉 Let me know if you want to be tagged when I post the chapters on here some time! :))
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Mm. Sounds interesting, but I’m totally unqualified. I don’t think I’d be able to help much… Sorry… 😅😑
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Hey no worries! 🤗
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I’m sorry, I don’t think I can help you 🙁
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That’s totally fine, girl! ☺️
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I’m definitely interested in reading your novel, but I’ve read almost no YA, so I wouldn’t be much help.
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No worries! I’ll be sure to tag you tho when I start sharing it on here!!
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Awesome! 🙂
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@esther-c I would love to help! This went into my spam for some reason, so I’m sorry I didn’t get back to you. Are you still looking for someone?
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Actually…I think you might be perfect. You gave some great feedback on my short story, so I’m sure you could do the same for my novel! :))
I’ll PM you later this week with more details and the link to the doc. Thank you so much!!! 🤗-
Awesome! I love family and sibling dynamics, and I also read a good amount of YA, so this seems right up my alley! (Although I won’t be able to help much with the 90s references, haha.)
Do you still have my email from the short story critique?-
Yay yay!! (Oh I know, right?? I’ve asked my parents and some other older writers I’ve met through KDWC, and even though they gave me a lot to use [plus Google, lol], there’s still something difficult about getting it right since I didn’t live then 🤪)
Yes I believe so!-
@esther-c Yeah, that totally makes sense! I was gonna say, ask your parents xD. But I’m sure it’s still difficult.
Great!! 😄
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I may have to get some YA recs from you sometime, because I struggle to find clean fiction that I would actually enjoy 😭
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Oh definitely! I’m sure I can come up with a list. Middle grade stuff can be great if it’s well done, because content is so much better. 😉
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Please tag me if you post recommendations! I want to read YA, but it’s usually filthy and cringe. -
For sure!! Until you come across that one middle school relationship that somehow works out perfectly. 😂
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Ok for some reason even though I still see your comments on the short story doc, it won’t let me view your email. 😅 Could you share that again with me so I can share the other doc?? I’ll tell you as soon as I see it if you don’t want to leave your email up.
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Awesome! Tysm!! I’ll probably send you the doc tomorrow since I need to make a few notes on it first. :))
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Ok I added you to the document! You should get an email about it I believe. (:
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Hoo boy. I’d love to, but uhhhh…I wouldn’t be any help. I’m a terrible critiquer and my romance experience is practically nil. You would probably help me more than I help you….sorry!
Funny enough though, my own romance work (a fanfic) took place in 1970 in New Mexico. What are the odds?
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Ahh, no problem! :))
No way! That’s so cool! XD-
Yeah it was just a consequence of how the original story was set up, but it’s funny to think about.
I doubt your characters will experience anything even close to mine though lol-
Oh dear, was it a Star Wars fanfic?? In that case, I hope my charries aren’t handling the types of weapons they use. 🤣
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No, it was something else, but yeah there were a lot of weapons involved XD
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My Star Wars fanfics don’t really cross over into our world. Yet.
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Though I suppose in a fanfic, you could do whatever 🤷🏻♀️
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Oh duhhhh 🤦🏻♀️ I’ve watched like all the Star Wars movies, I should know they don’t take place on earth 🤣
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lolllll no biggie.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
@power @jonas @whalekeeper @theduckator @elishavet-pidyon @freed_and_redeemed
Sorry, the tags didn’t tag you.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
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@ellette-giselle I am so, soooo glad you enjoyed Broken Shackles! 💜💜
Thank you so much for your support.
I’ve noted what you said and I can see where things got repetitive (something I’m still trying to work on😅). As far as Riker thinking his sins are greater, it honestly really depends. I based that part of his struggles based on my own battle…[Read more]
Oh I have enjoyed it! It was excellent!
I’m really, really looking forward to the last book! (I love endings, so I’m thinking it might be my fav!)
Anyhow, I hope that any criticism was helpful. Thank you again so much for writing these! You’re doing an amazing job and these books have been very inspiring!