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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
So Cool!!!! Oh my gosh. They look like both of them have a ton trauma. Not good for them…but good for me! I love trauma stories!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
YAY!!!!
LOVE THEM!!!
This Riker face claim is WAY better then the last one you used.
AHHH!!! So excited for the third book!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
February 16th
The EmpireLoosing Aelic has been the most heartbreaking thing I have experienced since Adrian’s death. Aelic was such a dear brother, and we all love…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
When Leon woke, the light in the shed was very dim. He could hear the sound of voices and pounding and feet hurrying back and forth outside. “I wonder what they’re doing,” he muttered. He began to wonder how the villagers…
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I find it really funny that whenever I want something quick to read, there’s always a new scene posted on here. XD
I highly suggest you first begin to prepare by seeking out a queen fit to rule alongside you and produce an heir.
Bro has a schedule, hehe. Do royal homework, get wife, produce baby.
So I can spend my time that…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
YIPPPY!!!!!!!!!
OOOOOOooooooo!!
This is going to be a good one!
one thing I noticed, you capitalize this mysterious “he” and in my mind a capitalized “He” makes me think of God/Jesus. I know it’s not, but it’s the first thing that came to mind. So maybe lowercase it?
Anyhow, this was really, really good! I…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
The next morning, Julian woke to the sound of voices and banging. He leapt to his feet and yanked on his boots. Leon was already pulling on his hat and beat him into the other room.
When Julian arrived, he found Marti…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
Leon, Julian, Rolf, Aelic, and Roland remained with Heinrich and Johannes at the University for five days. It was a wonderful time of fellowship and encouragement for them all. The companions would have liked to stay lon…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
I don’t think I’ll be able to post today, and if I do it’ll be late this afternoon. I’m going to be busy all day.
Guns.
Yay!!!
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed
The hurried navigation through the pews is all too real, lol.The brunette shrugged.
This is the feminine version of a french word, so unless I’m misunderstanding who is speaking here – I think it’s Riker – this should be brunet. Same difference between blonde and blond.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
First time I’ve ever laughed reading one of your scenes. Poor lover boy Leon. XD
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
*Indistinguishable sound of joy*
Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing! I love them both! They’re both great sections. The second is probably my favorite. Partially for the way it’s paced. It’s active and a great look at their new normal.
And of course Leon is there being the guy I’ve loved from the start, even if he…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Sorry! I was gone for a minute!
YAY!!!
Ooo, poor Leon. 🤣
I like this! I can’t wait to actually read it in the book! I’m super excited!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
*squeak of delight*
YAY!!! SECTION!!
Aw, so sad. 😭
Really good! Is this from book 3?!?!
I can’t wait to read it!!!!
caught two typos.
left to the mercy of his Nazi captors, whom had very little mercy
Should be “who”
and
he crouched slightly in front of the sixteen-year-old’s, meeting their t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
oof. Sorry.😬😁
Aw thank you. Philipp and his guys were pretty minor characters, but I always loved them. I read the true account of this exact same thing happening to a group of Roman soldiers and their lieutenant. I remember tearing up because of how sad it was that these young men had their lives cut short so brutally,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Oh my word! Hello! I had no idea you were reading this!!!
Way to tear me into pieces on a random Friday morning😭😭
Part of me is sorry, and the other part of me is very satisfied. 😂
Any thoughts on this section in particular?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Anyone want to take a survey for an essay I'm writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint @stephie @godlyfantasy12 @janellebelovedpig @freed_and_redeemed @power @thearcaneaxiom
tagging a couple more people….
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